In which I fail at flashfic PWPs (again)

Jan 26, 2010 21:56

Almost 700 words of a Battle entry and there's only just now a paragraph establishing the attraction.

Question: How would you describe the skin-baring portion of Kira's shirt? As in, right now the sentence says, "Kira stripped off her uniform top to reveal a sleeveless white undershirt with a band of …… beneath her collarbones." ETA: the_drifter to the rescue with "open weaving."

...Why yes, I'm filling my own prompt,* why do you ask?

*not a euphemism

fic writing (or lack thereof)

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