Fic! "Too Long," James Wilson/John Sheppard (House/SGA), Adult

Jan 20, 2008 15:45

Done! With five minutes to spare.

Title: Too Long
Fandom: House/Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: James Wilson/John Sheppard
Rating: R/NC-17
Word Count: 1,540 (+530 for the alternate scene)
Summary: Two men seize an opportunity to enjoy something they haven't let themselves have in a long time.
Disclaimer: Neither character/universe is mine; I'm just ( Read more... )

my writing

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topaz_eyes January 20 2008, 22:27:19 UTC
*wriggles in glee*

I see the--er, attraction--of Sheppard. ;-) Lovely job conveying the urgency for both of them.

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bironic January 20 2008, 22:50:28 UTC
Hee. I took what fangirls tend to go crazy over and put it all in there, with a touch of vulnerability for added allure. I'm thinking that generally, Wilson likes his men strong and his women needy.

Thank you! I'm glad it worked and made you wriggly. (And I'm so happy to have finished this in time. Three & three! *high-fives*)

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topaz_eyes January 20 2008, 23:05:40 UTC
Go you! \o/

I'm thinking that generally, Wilson likes his men strong and his women needy.

Because to whom can he turn for his needs? It's nice to see him taken care of.

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topaz_eyes January 21 2008, 04:29:54 UTC
And now I have read your alternate version. Oh, House. *shakes head fondly* Sonic the Hedgehog--*snerk*

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bironic January 21 2008, 12:42:31 UTC
Heh. I had no idea that nickname was going to be the highlight of the alternate version for people, but it makes me happy. Glad you enjoyed. :)

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