Fic! "Too Long," James Wilson/John Sheppard (House/SGA), Adult

[bironic]

Done! With five minutes to spare.

Title: Too Long
Fandom: House/Stargate: Atlantis
Pairing: James Wilson/John Sheppard
Rating: R/NC-17
Word Count: 1,540 (+530 for the alternate scene)
Summary: Two men seize an opportunity to enjoy something they haven't let themselves have in a long time.
Disclaimer: Neither character/universe is mine; I'm just

Comments

[phinnia]

Mmm. <3
He's awfully confident that House won't just decide to walk in.

[bironic]

You know, I was going to have House walk in from the balcony, and then I ran out of time and words. Maybe will do an alternate ending. :)

ETA: Adding a line to compensate.

[phinnia]

Lurrrrrrrvely. <3 <3

[bironic]

ETA ETA: Alternate scene added. :) Am curious if you think it works.

[phinnia]

*smirk* Sonic the Hedgehog. <3
I do like - I like them both. For different reasons.

[bironic]

Cool -- thanks!

[deelaundry]

Now, see, I thought Wilson was fudging a little when he said "No one" (which doesn't need a hyphen), and being extra daring. Guess that's a bridge too far.

[bironic]

Hyphen's out; and now I'm thinking I really should write the ending the way it was originally going to be, and see if it works. It was going to introduce some House/Wilson and Sheppard/McKay UST, but (a) I didn't know if that would clutter things up and (b) I don't want to be a one-trick pony with that sort of thing. :)

ETA: Alternate scene added. What do you think?

[deelaundry]

It's good. I love Sheppard thinking about McKay, and I looove "Sonic the Hedgehog."

The original might be my personal favorite, though, simply because it's nice to think about Wilson getting some without House in the picture.

[bironic]

I certainly wouldn't replace it, but I think I'll keep the second one in here too. I like the first better too, like you said, because it's just Sheppard and Wilson, no McKay- and House-shadows interfering. Thanks!