MTS: Overdrive, part 1, NC-17, CLex
Part thirteen of the Manual Transmission Series is ready.
Warnings: A lot of drama and angst. Schmoop. Boy/boy sex. Alien weirdness. Cliffhanger ending. Still a WIP! If you can't take it, don't click! The final section will be available in a few short months.
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951KB (What? Hey, at least it didn't hit a meg!)
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^_^ Every single time Lex says I love you to Clark I just can't stop myself from smiling. It makes me so very happy each and every time. Then Clark on red K, it was beyond beautiful. You brought me to tears despite his slightly forceful actions and I have to agree with Lex 100% that Clark meant what he said, it just loosened his tongue so he could say the things he on his mind, his desires without hesitation. You express it so well that I really feel it. haha please don't think I'm crazy, but you are an awesome writer.
Now, I had been hoping right along with Lex and Clark, that Bastian's sister would make it, but the moment Ches saw her leaving in his dream I knew it was over. My breath caught in my throat when Ches thought she was talking to him through the monitors. You had me in tears right along with him when it happened. I'm still up in the air about the "Stalker" because now I feel it can be one of two people, though I'm still leaning toward Ches. I hope it's not him and if it is, I hope he lives through it. He's such a good man. But I'm not so naive not to realize how most people end up who have been poisoned by kryptonite.
And then the ending! I was amazed, shocked, pained and sadden by what the crystal obsession is doing to Lex. The intensity of it had my heart going out to them both. I was just happy that Clark was, able to take notice of it more this time and really be there. I think Lex is changing a bit, he moved so fast that Clark didn't even see it *wags brow* Then, haha I know you said there wouldn't be MPREG but the double heart beat, one rapid, had me anxious for a second. hehe sorry, I mean no disrespect. I will always love the thought of them having babies together.
Then the struggle. I was sure that Clark would intercede, or stop the bullet, but he just froze. Let the bullet fly! But I understand completely, it's ingrained in him not to reveal his secret so he froze. Watching, shocked and just not acting. Then Lex!!! oh man, you really know how make people want more. Clark's not ready to fly yet, getting there slowly, but for Lex he's going to try. Geezzz..... Lex has his own fear of heights, I wonder if he's even still conscious! *shudders* And you know he probably didn't even think to call for Clark, because he knew his fears and would never risk him.
*squeess happily* ^__^ Waiting ever patiently for more!! *hugs you and dances around* One of your many loyal readers Priscilla
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Priscilla, thank you so much! I don't know how in the world I missed this comment from a month ago (!!), but I'm very happy to finally see it to-day of all days, just before I buckle down on the final section! Hmm... Was it Fate? :)
It's so nice to read about all your reactions to the various plot points as they unfolded. You make me smile. ^_^ And, don't worry, I won't ever think you're crazy for saying you like my writing. A flatterer? Yes. One of my favourite people? Yes. But crazy? Naaaaaaah. ;) (Wasn't it Tom Welling who once commented during a radio interview, "Just because they're my fans doesn't make them crazy..."? heh heh)
LOL I know you want the mpreg; I remember. Not disrespectful at all--the heart wants what the heart wants. ;) And who knows, right? It's so many years away for them that it's even possible. People change all the time. Who can really say?
Thanks again, Priscilla. I'm going to gather up all the good feelings you've given me, and go sit in front of the final section with them clinging to my psyche. :)
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