Comments | bionic: FIC: "if hope..." [supernatural, sam/dean, pg-13]

bionic

FIC: "if hope..." [supernatural, sam/dean, pg-13]

Jul 24, 2008 22:40

If hope...
by bionic
pg-13
3,653 words

summary: If hope is a dangerous hole, will you join me? Angst, in a motel room. Takes place sometime during season 3 though I'm not sure where because of my avoidance of actual timelines and sometimes canon. I like to play in my own box...?

( Dean’s foot on the gas never lets up until the full moon has disappeared into a brightening sky and his eyes are drooping shut. Things had started going south after the werewolf slashed open Sam’s side and Dean had a bitch of a time trying to stitch him back together again. )

fic: sam/dean, supernatural

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bionic July 25 2008, 22:11:54 UTC

Thank you for reading, and for picking out the 'dressing and stitching line' - that was my favorite too, heh. And YES, EMPIRES! I can't stop listening to their stuff.

tabaqui July 25 2008, 05:18:39 UTC

Dean wishes he could chase them away for him, or bring the sunlight spilling into the room. Sometimes he wishes he could wipe himself from Sam’s memory, so Sam could be free of this and never have to remember Dean caught and struggling in this losing battle for his life.

Oh, Dean.
*sniffle*

Nice, nice stuff.

bionic July 25 2008, 22:16:48 UTC

Yeah, oh Dean.... I kinda wish it had turned out differently, just to get away from the angsty, 'poor Dean' headspace but...this is what wanted to come out! Thanks so much for reading :)

roxymissrose July 25 2008, 06:58:52 UTC

Oh, my, that was so very good. I loved the description of Dean's perfect morning--it seems just like something he'd truly enjoy. So far the show has shown us just how very simple the things he wants are, so small and simple, it's kind of heart-breaking in itself. You really brought that here. The kiss in the end seemed so natural a thing to happen. Beautifully done!

bionic July 25 2008, 22:19:28 UTC

oh wow, thank you! That means a ton coming from you :D I'm glad the simplicity of the perfect morning came through, and how much Dean appreciates the small stuff. It is heartbreaking but Dean (and Sam) are just such tragic figures... oh boys! *smishes them together*

azziria July 25 2008, 06:59:59 UTC

Oh, lovely! Quiet and gutwrenching and beautiful. And so very intimate. Bookmarking this one.

bionic July 25 2008, 22:20:18 UTC

aww...thank you so much for reading, and so very glad you enjoyed it!

fleshflutter July 25 2008, 09:00:38 UTC

My God, this was beautiful. Raw and quiet and full of pain, but so so beautiful. Awesome work. :)

bionic July 25 2008, 22:21:20 UTC

ok, I'm always like floored when you leave comments. That means a lot, thank you so much!