Comments | bionic: evil sam fic

bionic

evil sam fic

Jun 19, 2007 19:35

Untitled - (I'm really bad at titles)
Sam/Dean, 2,738 words
NC-17, dubcon
thank you to lissa_bear for looking it over and giving me suggestions. I probably rambled a bit too much in my emails.

( Dean comes back from the bar one night )

fic: sam/dean, supernatural

Comments 53

amothea June 20 2007, 04:03:33 UTC

oh wow this was hot and I really felt Dean's confusion.

bionic June 20 2007, 15:48:36 UTC

thanks! I'm glad the confusion came through. And sex doesn't come easy for me to write, so, again, glad you found it hot!

eisakay June 20 2007, 04:32:53 UTC

Oh man, evil!Sam. I liked this, I was all, NOOOOO. Get away from Dean.

bionic June 20 2007, 15:49:50 UTC

heh heh! Yeah. Evil!Sam is tricky. You want to like him but he's evil, and you know, kinda Dean's dilemma here as well. Thanks for reading hon :)

roxymissrose June 20 2007, 04:33:10 UTC

The story drove me insane--it was like walking on a tightrope--poor Dean, geez! It was really a heartbreeakig little story.

And the snippet--I think I'll need to read that story. *nods*

roxymissrose June 20 2007, 04:34:16 UTC

in English, that would be 'heartbreaking', yes.

bionic June 20 2007, 15:51:40 UTC

aww...I didn't mean to drive you batty! But thank you ever so much for reading :D

The J2 is about 1700 words now. It's kind stalled. I always stall out when I reach a certain word count (weird), which is around here. Then I have to really push myself to keep going.

aynslee June 20 2007, 04:37:14 UTC

Wow.

The glint in Sam’s eye is hard and unkind. “Why don’t you come here and make me?” he asks. The quality of Sam’s voice one that Dean’s never heard before. It’s low, dark, and it scares Dean how excited it makes him feel. Like he could take on Hell and win, like every challenge he faced when he was first learning the ropes, the same thrill of the chase.

Poor Dean--I really felt for him--I didn't know whether to trust Sam or not, but I'm gonna go with no. But this was amazing hot, and scary too, for both of them, since Sam was clearly not his usual self.

Very nice first SPN fic!

bionic June 20 2007, 15:57:58 UTC

I'm glad you found it hot AND scary - just what I was aiming for, heh. Thank you for reading! I'm hoping to write more, possibly something that goes along with this.

It makes me giddy when writers I adore leave comments, so, again, thanks for letting me know you liked this :)

owzers June 20 2007, 06:57:42 UTC

Awesome fic hon!!! I loved the building dread and sexual tension and confusion. You do a very powerful Evil Sam - very menacing and seductive - perfect! More? *squishes you*

bionic June 20 2007, 16:02:10 UTC

Hee! Your icon. LOL. Naughty boys.

Thank you! I'm glad you think Evil Sam comes across as really evil here, scary and seductive. I wanted to keep it a kind of low-key evil, just under the surface, if ya' know what I mean. Anyway! Glad you enjoyed it. And I want to write more in this same vein, so maybe more to come.

owzers July 1 2007, 01:33:51 UTC

Oh man - that would soooooo rock if you wrote more evil Sammy!! You do it better than anyone else hon - and I've read a ton of SPN fic. You'd be making our world a better place by doing so! *nods emphatically*