The Comforts of Home
by Meixia
bionic pairing: Connor/Murphy
summary: Leaving home and finding it again.
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: not mine, don't sue.
notes: despite the title, this is not a domestic fic. It's more of a hurt/comfort thing. For
endless_fever because of her birthday and for the
firstlines1000 challenge 'It should hurt, but it doesn't'.
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The Comforts of Home )
Comments 13
just.
fucking.
wow.
*humps*
i just. damn.
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::dribbles onto keyboard::
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::translation: thank you very much you rock loved it lots.::
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I have never read a BDS fic where one brother left the other. Actualy left. I have to admit, that was hard tot ake, at first. But you wrote it so perfectly, so realisticaly...and I had to root for Connor to call Murph, just call him and say he was sorry for leaving or something...Beautiful story, I guess that's what I'm trying to say. I could feel each of the brother's pain, and my heart pulled for a reunion, which you handled gracefully. Great job. Really.
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I'm a masochist in that sense. Take the two apart and see how they function without their other half. Heh.
Thank you so much for the kind words. It means a lot :) Really, really glad that you enjoyed it!
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how absolutely lovely and gorgeously descriptive..very rich..
loved it, perfect darlin'!
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