(might not be commenting in your journal for awhile because I have to use this for the next 2 weeks... lol)
You deserve a medal for reading this, it's so bad!
I'm actually thinking of adding to the end so that Jongin also kills himself in the end. This is because I'm terrible at endings (amongst other things...) and I see no other solution than killing off everyone.
I really liked it, and I'm not just saying that; I liked how the ending was, basically, a slap in the face. It kind of left me sitting there for a moment, speechless, and then I started to laugh. :D It's an unexpected horror/thriller comedy (or maybe it's me perceiving it as a comedy because of that abrupt scene), because I was NOT expecting that ending, ha, ha.
That would be a really short and sad story. :O But I know where you're coming from, lol.
(might not be commenting in your journal for awhile because I have to use this for the next 2 weeks... lol)
You deserve a medal for reading this, it's so bad!
I'm actually thinking of adding to the end so that Jongin also kills himself in the end. This is because I'm terrible at endings (amongst other things...) and I see no other solution than killing off everyone.
I've spent way too much time on exochocolate! LOL
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I really liked it, and I'm not just saying that; I liked how the ending was, basically, a slap in the face. It kind of left me sitting there for a moment, speechless, and then I started to laugh. :D It's an unexpected horror/thriller comedy (or maybe it's me perceiving it as a comedy because of that abrupt scene), because I was NOT expecting that ending, ha, ha.
That would be a really short and sad story. :O But I know where you're coming from, lol.
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Haha thanks!
Oh no, it was definitely a comedy though I'm not sure if I started out with that intention. I have a hard time writing serious things haha
Well, my next trick is to write about Chen going to an anime convention dressed as Pikachu... I expect I'll write it in a similar style LOL XD
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