Yeah... That kinda doesn't fit with the type of story i'm making. Its this guy who decides to destroy the world, because he complains to God about all the problems in the world, and God leaves heaven because of it. He then gets mad and believes the world to be flawed to begin with, so he decides to start over, and gets this one person to kill God because he feels that he deserves the right to do it the most, and creates this plan to get some people to go on a colony to wherever the new world will be, and destroy most of the world existing(or convert them in some way), and create a false religion to get them to come to his side, or do something or the other for the benefit.
I need to flesh out some points, and the guy himself a bit better. I have a better outline of this, but its still kinda sketchy. I know what's going to happen, but I need to think of why it happens. That's always been my problem. I'm thinking its because I haven't spent enough time on the character's. I already did the first part which is kinda like an introduction and setup of all the events. I also need to fix the structure a bit, but once I figure out the guy's plan, everything else will be very easy.
I need to flesh out some points, and the guy himself a bit better. I have a better outline of this, but its still kinda sketchy. I know what's going to happen, but I need to think of why it happens. That's always been my problem. I'm thinking its because I haven't spent enough time on the character's. I already did the first part which is kinda like an introduction and setup of all the events. I also need to fix the structure a bit, but once I figure out the guy's plan, everything else will be very easy.
Thanks for the idea.
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