Aug 28, 2006 22:03
poetry to attack emo kids?
yeah so it's ironic hypocritical and dumb
but its suitably rage-tastic and I liked some of the lines
I pray you cut your wrists too deep
Existence from the praise of the weak
Children of AIDS and poverty
Ask not for the sedation you shriek for
Grow gluttonous on this love
You do not deserve it
This voracious maw
Insert empathy here
I long for your endless self pity
Sustenance from insecurity
Welcome to real life
You don’t matter here
Stigmata of your martyrdom
The quiet savior who shouts
Galvanization
Meticulous dismemberment of the soul
How do you take so much while appearing to give
I pray you cut your wrists too deep
Maybe some day you’ll have the vertebrae to atone
Stare with nonchalance at reflected images
The reflection of the moist eyes of your victimized
Steal their affection, returned with malice
and a false kiss
Your depth is akin to your scars
I pray you cut your wrists too deep
the writing is a little weak and the word choices havent been looked over
but I rather like it despite the lack of love
as for me yeah my leg hurts
so imana get to be lazy for a few days
get fat and happy :)
lata lovas hatas and everything in between