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Aug 22, 2009 22:55

Title: The locker room/shower PART 1

Rating: R

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: After Pepa recieves Silvia's text telling her to meet her in the locker room

A/N: This is obvioously going to be in two parts and the second part is going to be porn pretty much...I am dedicating this to the almighty horndog, my mistress Junebuggy!

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bigmarianfan August 22 2009, 14:48:32 UTC

Yeah I know the silhouettes really annoyed me, especially as they looked like they were having so much fun!

foot_print_1 August 22 2009, 00:15:43 UTC

Ok, that was short, yeah, but it was good! :D
You have a nice style. The password was “handcuffs", Hah! I thought that was awesome!
Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to read and comment when I see chapter 2 floating around!

bigmarianfan August 22 2009, 14:49:24 UTC

Thanks for yor comment, yeah it was actually shorter than I intented but I had writers block! The next part will be longer i PROMISE!

OH GOOD GOD! junebuggy01 August 22 2009, 00:56:50 UTC

Okay... Cliffhanger_smut seems to be a trend. I can't even think right now simply because of the anticipation for the second part!! Shower smut? *Faints*

*picks self off floor* Thanks Hun, I don't know if you gathered that I can't wait for the next part, but I can't.

Loves mistress!

Re: OH GOOD GOD! bigmarianfan August 22 2009, 14:50:27 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it my love, for the next part I may need to cool myself down repeatedly so I can complete it!

Re: OH GOOD GOD! junebuggy01 August 22 2009, 18:58:31 UTC

I'll fan you if it'll help you finish faster!

slayergirl13 August 22 2009, 01:08:27 UTC

That was good. I've been waiting for someone to tackle this unseen scene, forever. You've started out great. I'm looking forward to what comes next. I'm really interested to see what you have the lovely Silvia doing when Pepa says "Siiii, pelirroja."

cheers to you for a great fic

bigmarianfan August 22 2009, 14:51:10 UTC

Yes I have an interesting plan for that moment, I hope you like it!

sia_9 August 22 2009, 01:23:01 UTC

ooh you have a nice style you just get out what you're trying to say, i like! i like that they didn't get interrupted...yet

bigmarianfan August 22 2009, 14:52:11 UTC

I do not believe in interuptions I'm afraid, besides they already get interrupted in the show enough anway!