Comments | bigmamag: Cure for the Flu (Fraser/Kowalski, NC-17)

bigmamag

Cure for the Flu (Fraser/Kowalski, NC-17)

May 18, 2008 20:37

kristiinthedark is not feeling well, so I wrote her Due South porn of the Fraser/Ray K variety. This is also, consequently, my first DS fic, so this is pretty monumental.

Title: Cure for the Flu

Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Brief mentions of bad bodily functions.
Summary: Ray wakes up to find Fraser naked. He can work with that.

( He was delirious, had to be. )

writing, fan fic, due south

Comments 19

kristiinthedark May 19 2008, 11:21:55 UTC

*GLEE* This is an awesome thing to wake up to! I love hallucinating!Ray and the way Fraser is very willing to take advantage of the situation (although NO ONE would be able to turn down Ray Kowalski saying "fuck me", I think. I may be biased).

This, right here, though, is my favorite:

One was that he had propositioned Fraser and here he still was, comfortably naked. The other was that Fraser’s cock was now standing at half-mast, its owner unaware of its sudden interest in the conversation.

Yeah, he was all over that. Besides, he could claim delirium later.

Oh, Ray.

Thank you, thank you for this!!! I will be thinking about them all day now! :D

bigmamag May 19 2008, 18:06:31 UTC

I'm so gald you liked it and yes, no one can ever resist Ray Kowalski asking them to fuck him, especially all sweaty and naked. And Ray is such an impetuous person, he does what he wants to first and then questions them later, which I love. :D

zabira May 20 2008, 20:45:34 UTC

awwww...this put a HUGE grin on my face, thank you! i especially like ray's little digression about wanting to laugh and feeling awkward about it. oh, ray. i &hearts him.

bigmamag May 21 2008, 02:52:07 UTC

Thank you for reading, I feel so good when people say that it made them happy. :)

thezonefic May 20 2008, 22:21:02 UTC

Very much enjoyed, more please.

bigmamag May 21 2008, 02:52:47 UTC

Thank you, I feel better about posting it now.

akamine_chan May 20 2008, 23:49:32 UTC

But Fraser looked like Ray was breaking him. His eyes were closed and his mouth was open, face twisted in pain. He was killing the guy, breaking him into smaller and smaller pieces, and Ray would have felt quite powerful if he wasn't issuing a steady stream of needy whimpers himself.

Oh, how sweet. Loved this.

bigmamag May 21 2008, 02:53:30 UTC

Thank you, that was a part that I was worried about making sense and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

It's like it was my birthday or something slashylassy May 21 2008, 01:46:10 UTC

Wow, a new DS fic! Not only new, but super-great as well. NeedyRay! and a finally-unrestrained Fraser! Absolutely yummy! More, much more please!

Re: It's like it was my birthday or something bigmamag May 21 2008, 02:54:28 UTC

You totally made my day, being all complementary about this fic. :D Thank you for reading!