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Nov 04, 2008 16:32

Title: and every breath we drew was (hallelujah)
Rating: Hard R
Pairing: Buffy/Angel
Summary:I did my best, it wasn't much/I couldn't feel so I learned to touch/I've told the truth, I didn't come to fool you. Angel, Buffy, and reunion. Happy endings don't come easy. Sometimes they don't come at all. Six times our star-cross'd lovers never made it ( Read more... )

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danu_mactire November 5 2008, 00:51:38 UTC
*wipes away a tear* beautiful. . .I love it. . .*is speechless*

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biggrstaffbunch January 24 2009, 04:17:04 UTC
Thank you so much...so sorry for the late response!

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skinnieminnie27 November 5 2008, 02:10:10 UTC
omigosh loved it! And i usually never read B/A fics :O
Alright and this is probably random and weird but could i friend you?

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biggrstaffbunch January 24 2009, 04:22:22 UTC
I am so glad you gave this a chance...thank you for reading, sorry for the late response. And yes, you can totally friend me!

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a2zmom November 5 2008, 02:15:31 UTC
This an absolutely gorgeous, painful piece. I just feel you've uncovered so many truths about them and who they are and what they mean to each other.

You're not stupid. More than that, just because you're occasionally blind when it comes to your heart doesn't mean you're naive. You know that if he didn't leave tonight, he might not have ever left at all. And then three months down the road, maybe five, you would have kissed him and he would have kissed you back, and the happiness that sleeps inside of you, the light that has no place in a world this dark, it would turn the key that keeps his soul in the cage of his body. Havoc would ensue. People would get hurt. People would die. And you would let it happen, because you're not strong enough to stop it again.What a beautiful way to present the reality of their relationship, but it's true. And as hard as it was, Buffy also knew it had to come to this ( ... )

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biggrstaffbunch January 24 2009, 04:24:26 UTC
First: I am so so so sorry for the late response. Thank you SO MUCH for the gratifying and lovely review. It means a lot that you continue to validate my B/A love, haha, especially since I absolutely LOVE your fic.

Also, as for 4&5...eeek! My mistake...I didn't even register that. Thanks for catching it!

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robas November 5 2008, 12:13:17 UTC
This is heart-breakingly gorgeous! I love your evocative way of using words.

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biggrstaffbunch January 24 2009, 03:22:07 UTC
The response is inexcusably late, but here it is: thank you so much! I'm glad it was evocative :) I worked hard to make it that way, and I'm so happy you read.

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helygen November 5 2008, 20:58:36 UTC
This is stunning. It has a melancholy feel to it, and your writing style is very poetic. I love it.

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biggrstaffbunch January 24 2009, 03:21:28 UTC
I'm so sorry for the utterly late response, but thank you so much! I am really glad you enjoyed this.

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