It's that thing where you scribble notes about how hot Gojyo is without a shirt on, only without bothering to use complete sentences, and then you pretend like those notes are going to contribute to your story in any meaningful way.
Oh, I'm good at that, I call it 'prewriting.' The sad part is this story was supposed to be 90% Koumyou/Ukoku, and Sanzo and Goku have already bullied their way into it.
Sanzo tends to bully his way in. His pointing out that it's canon that Koumyou had little Koryuu when he met Ukoku helped. The thought of his tiny self snarking all over the place more or less sealed the deal.
Koumyou smiled. "Of course." He packed the boys into the back seat and turned the radio on.
"This music's cool," Goku said. "What is it?"
"Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young," Koumyou answered, as Cory said, "Hippie stuff."
"That 'hippie stuff' you deride is an essential part of popular music history," Koumyou chided gently.
"Yeah," Cory said, opening his juice box. "The hippie part."
I blame the fact that I've got Sanzo trapped with kids, perverts, and a whole shitton of bugs. It shouldn't be any surprise that he has Things to Say about that situation.
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And then you lose another round of Minesweeper.
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Koumyou smiled. "Of course." He packed the boys into the back seat and turned the radio on.
"This music's cool," Goku said. "What is it?"
"Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young," Koumyou answered, as Cory said, "Hippie stuff."
"That 'hippie stuff' you deride is an essential part of popular music history," Koumyou chided gently.
"Yeah," Cory said, opening his juice box. "The hippie part."
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I blame the fact that I've got Sanzo trapped with kids, perverts, and a whole shitton of bugs. It shouldn't be any surprise that he has Things to Say about that situation.
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