SPN fic: Dazzleland 10/10

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Chapter 10/Over, Over, Over

Destination: Niagara Falls, of course. Gen, PG-13. Complete. Horror/drama. A smidgen of angst. A big freakin’ smidgen of angst.

Travel Advisory: High body count. Blood. General wretchedness. Unforgivably wordy.

Cabin Crew: I never leave home without them -- jmm0001and Lemmypie. They make sure I have the right

Comments

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I did didn't i?

I hadn't even finished posting at the Pit and I saw it had come in and did my spastic flappy dance.

I aim to please cause i am just that awesome! No seriously you deserve all the comments you get. This was an fantastic end to a truly fantastic fic. You really get Sam and Dean and their messy, intense but so damn loving relationship. They hurt each other so much but they love each other more than that and that really comes across here.

“It must have been shit, left with him. After.”

“It wasn’t being left with him, you fucking moron. Shit. Any day of the week I’d have done that. That wasn’t it.”

You hit the damn nail on the head. I think a surprising number of people don't realize that Dean doesn't regret staying with his dad. Now they (and Sam) know.

I might be the slightest bit insane but the way Dean turns his weakness against Billy and starts torturing him right back? That was hot just because it was so damn competent and so damn Dean. He really is a dangerous opponent and underestimating him is a big mistake. I sorta, did want Dean to kill Billy, but really Dean doesn't need that on his shoulders.

The moment where Sam and Elise part? My heart breaks for him there. Poor, poor Sammy. (re-reading this after Heart makes it that much more painful). I love how protective Sam is over Dean, how much he looks out for him throughout this whole thing.

I love these boys.

And next fluff right? Yay!

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Competent!Dean is so hot. I think the most fun I ever had with that was in Old Rebel Yeller when he was making bullets. Had to take a shower, really. LOL.

Fluff, utter fluff next. Outlined last night. Because I just can't go a day without writing something, apparently.

It's funny. Lots of people read into it what they want/see/fear, but I see Sam as loving, protective, but self-centered. Many readers commented on Sam's selfishness in this fic, but I'm pretty good with it. There's lots of evidence in canon that this is what's up. And I'm largely a canon writer.

Thanks again!