New SPN Fic: Dazzleland, Chapter 1/10

[big_pink]

Dazzleland

Summary:: “Someone goes over Niagara in a barrel. You gonna jump in and try to save them?” - Dean Winchester, Crossroad Blues. Sam’s making plans, and they don’t include his father or hunting. They might not even include Dean. High school in two time periods.

Rating: Gen, PG-13: swearing, violence, maybe some sex later on. If

Comments

[ileliberte]

yes, cheery was just the word I was looking for :/ Very very interested in knowing what happened six years ago and oh boys! The whole scene with Dean at the store was really visceral.

[big_pink]

Dear me, I realize now I'm going to need some Niagara Falls icons. *peers around anxiously*

Yes, yes, I have the feeling things aren't exactly looking up for Dean's present day state of mind. The more I write in this fandom, the bloodier things get. You should have seen me at the beginning. Fucking bunnies and pixies, I tell you.

[ileliberte]

[big_pink]

Why, yes I did.

I wish you could have seen my face when this popped up. I was shrieking with delight, running around like a chicken with its head off, flopping about until I lay, spent, in a pool of blood. Cool!

[dolimir_k]

Good start. I look forward to reading more.

[big_pink]

And the lovely thing with me is...there's always more! Nine chapters to be exact! Woot!

[marinarusalka]

Whee! A new fic from you! Now that's what I call a holiday present.

I love your turns of phrase, I really do. The high-school jocks like a Luftwaffe squadron, the girls "hard as chickadees mid-winter." I can always see and hear the world you create so perfectly.

Great characterizations, past and present. Sam's teenage resentment and present-day fear, Dean's grief and simmering rage, each brother's distinctive brand of protectiveness toward the other. Dean's explosion into violence at the convenience store was very disturbing, and scarily consistent with what we've seen of him this season. For a moment there, I really worried he'd shoot one of the kids. And I loved Sam's vision in the car, the way the boys' reaction brought back all the terror of the accident in DT, and the intriguing hints about what happened/will happen in Niagra Falls.

*fastening my seat belt for a bumpy ride*

[big_pink]

I'm writing Dean present day just as Kripke handed him to me (don't I wish). Do fasten your seatbelt, darling. It will be a bumpy ride. Promise.

Ho ho ho.

[tabaqui]

Jayzus fucking god, here you go again, giving me angsty boys that *won't talk* and hurt themselves and hurt each other and.....
*clutches heart*

That combination lock had survived three moves now. Back at the school, outside this room, it hung on his locker like a talisman, a sign that maybe Sam existed outside the confines of shitty motels and apartments, outside the incessantly moving Impala, that he could stay in one place, not be a piece of John Winchester’s flotsam, detritus from a shipwreck seventeen years old.

That *hurts*, damnit.

This kinda makes up for it but it hurts, too.

“C’mon, I’ll drive. It’s just a little cut, a teeny tiny Bandaid’ll do it. Think there’s one in here with Nemo on it.” Sam lifted his head just in time to see Dean grin, holding out the horrendously depleted first aid bag.

The lengths I go to get him to smile, Sam thought, wondering when this had shifted.

I wish you did the Wincest, 'cause these boys need a cuddle leik whoa.

Yis, i'm hooked, just drag me on in.

[big_pink]

Oh, I know. You LOVE the boys being all functional and all. For some, it's the sexy scenes with the boy/boy body fluids. Me? Yeah, the not talking. It's exquisite torture! But I write the wincest all the time, toots! Dean was on SAM's LAP in last scene, for god's sake! What do you think happened when Sam went all to Visionland? Huh!

[tabaqui]

Really, you *do* write Wincest in a 'omg, i can't actually live without breathing in your space daily' way, it's more than enough. Sometimes i just want your boys to get in a desperate lip-lock just 'cause they're *so* damn non-functional and hurty and locked down.

Bodily fluids aren't, um...necessary. Heh. I've been sidestepping them a lot myself, in the last year or so, in everything i write.
:)

And i didn't say, but the whole scene in the little mini-mart? And Dean pretty much losing it all over those ignorent boys?

Made my heart hurt. I mean - *jayzus*. That's just exactly *right* and it sucks.

You, of course, rock. :)

*um. being in someone's lap 'cause you're saving yourself and them from fiery death!! isn't quite what i had in mind but i'll take it! Heeeeeeeee.*

[big_pink]

Oh, your fic is very discrete and all. No great lashings of KY jelly or other more biological stuff. But yeah, read between the lines and I'm 3/4 of the way there in some scenes. Mostly laughing my fool head off.

[starfish1295]

Well, wasn’t that a nice cheery present for you just before Christmas?

eeee! Wonderful!

Your Dean really is one scary SOB in that store. Poor boy's so very messed up I love it!.

[big_pink]

So messed up. Wouldn't have him any other way. Except maybe with a big red bow on top of his head. Yep, that'd do it.