i read this one my phone last night when i went to bed lol, but i just had to come back and leave a message becase omg. this. fic.
i was totally caught off guard with unicorn!dae and tbh i was weirded out a bit, because i've never read a fic with unicorns but it was still really interesting, i thought it would turn crach-ish, which i found weird because the beginning was kinda angsty, so i just kept on reading and everything was just so. good. you wrote something amazing, i mean, and not to sound mean weeps, but you pulled off making daehyun and yongguk a unicorn. your intro was so nice and really captivating, your descriptions are lovely and just brings out all kinds of feels, like this had an angsty kinda feel to it at times, but it was also funny and really adorable ;;
and then jongup and bb zelo i just- so cute ;A; AND HIMCHANNIE-HYUNG
NNNNNNGH AND THE END YOU ALMOST HAD ME ROLLING AROUND MY BED BECAUSE NO AND YOUNGJAE THEN REALISING WHAT WHO HE WANTED AND IT WAS SELFISH AND LOOK HE'S ALL GROWN UP JFKADSFALDFAKJD
'I TOLD YOU I'D TAKE AWAY YOUR PURITY' I'M GONNA PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE JUNG DAEHYUN. THIS WAS JUST BRILLIANT OKAY TTTT
ahhhh this is so nice, I don't know how to respond >_< /flails
I don't know how my brain works xD it was a crack idea, but I get attached to the idea of making it serious and ended up running with it, I'm sorry it was so weird .__. you had every right to think it'd be a crack fic and I have no idea how to remedy that xD but I'm really glad you kept reading! Thank you so much for your comments on the actual writing part (I HAVE SO MUCH TO WORK ON CRY) it's super encouraging!
Keke rolling around is good, and UGH stupid Daehyun needs to be punched sometimes!! Uasdlfjhg I'm happy somebody watched the video xD I must have watched it like 50 times over the course of writing this, as inspiration. Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment! ♥
you made it work though, it was a really fun read, and i'd love to see you future writings~! c:
i clicked the link when just before i commented and when i saw which vide it i was so happy, he's so cute in it and i can't with how they added the blush effect dfkalsadfdcs (it was actually that show that made youngjae my bias♥)
i was totally caught off guard with unicorn!dae and tbh i was weirded out a bit, because i've never read a fic with unicorns but it was still really interesting, i thought it would turn crach-ish, which i found weird because the beginning was kinda angsty, so i just kept on reading and everything was just so. good. you wrote something amazing, i mean, and not to sound mean weeps, but you pulled off making daehyun and yongguk a unicorn. your intro was so nice and really captivating, your descriptions are lovely and just brings out all kinds of feels, like this had an angsty kinda feel to it at times, but it was also funny and really adorable ;;
and then jongup and bb zelo i just- so cute ;A; AND HIMCHANNIE-HYUNG
NNNNNNGH AND THE END YOU ALMOST HAD ME ROLLING AROUND MY BED BECAUSE NO AND YOUNGJAE THEN REALISING WHAT WHO HE WANTED AND IT WAS SELFISH AND LOOK HE'S ALL GROWN UP JFKADSFALDFAKJD
'I TOLD YOU I'D TAKE AWAY YOUR PURITY' I'M GONNA PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE JUNG DAEHYUN. THIS WAS JUST BRILLIANT OKAY TTTT
ALSO THE VIDEO YOU LINKED OKAY I'M GONE
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I don't know how my brain works xD it was a crack idea, but I get attached to the idea of making it serious and ended up running with it, I'm sorry it was so weird .__. you had every right to think it'd be a crack fic and I have no idea how to remedy that xD but I'm really glad you kept reading! Thank you so much for your comments on the actual writing part (I HAVE SO MUCH TO WORK ON CRY) it's super encouraging!
Keke rolling around is good, and UGH stupid Daehyun needs to be punched sometimes!! Uasdlfjhg I'm happy somebody watched the video xD I must have watched it like 50 times over the course of writing this, as inspiration. Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment! ♥
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i clicked the link when just before i commented and when i saw which vide it i was so happy, he's so cute in it and i can't with how they added the blush effect dfkalsadfdcs (it was actually that show that made youngjae my bias♥)
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