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FIC: Virtue, mckay/sheppard, pg-13

Jul 12, 2006 23:00

Title: Virtue [?format=light]
Author: bibliotech [bibliofic@gmail.com]
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard (SGA)
Rating: PG-13 for language
Disclaimer: Not mine, this never, ever happened, I don't own these characters. 100% fiction.
Summary: “Welcome back, congratulations on not dying. Do you have to come back from every planet a walking soil sample?”Note the second: ( Read more... )

sga:it's a city not a yo-yo, fanfic, fanfic: sga: mckay/sheppard

Comments 61

capra_maritimus July 13 2006, 04:46:45 UTC

“I think I’m all out of adrenaline,” John said with a small sigh.

“I could tel-“

“But you should still stay. You never know, it could come back. Some day. Maybe twice a day.”

“What are you-oh. Oh.”

*snicker* Rodney may have started it but it took John to keep it going. :D Great banter, even with the cracked rib. :D

bibliotech July 13 2006, 05:11:10 UTC

I just have this secret fondness for stories where John turns the tables on Rodney. I demand more of them, and then I realised that I could just write one and then make everyone write better ones to prove how awful I am. It's foolproof!

sorchar July 13 2006, 05:03:23 UTC

This is a great story, and the narrative voice you've used works perfectly for John and Rodney. It's wonderful.

bibliotech July 13 2006, 05:11:49 UTC

Aww! That's what I worried about the most. It's my first time writing an SGA fic, and I didn't want to make them too OOC.

ferret_kitty July 13 2006, 05:09:11 UTC

this is really fun, and sweet. Although the never really did get around to that "second time." ^_^ I love your journal "title" too, by the way.

"Not to put too fine a point on it. Say I'm the only bee in your bonnet. Make a little birdhouse in your soul." ^_^

bibliotech July 13 2006, 05:12:49 UTC

Hee, I know. It was more of a cuddle, but I don't think they'd complain too much about it.

And that is one of the best songs ever. I think my journal title's responsible for me playing it over and over today. And your icon! That's just too perfect.

ferret_kitty July 13 2006, 07:59:24 UTC

Horray, I'm glad you like the icon. I'm so stupidly proud of it (it's my first).

I love that song. And that group. The end. ^_^

lallybroch July 13 2006, 05:11:53 UTC

Aw! And also, I just re-read this three times. I like the shoe removal. Not like, in a fetish way. Just in an "Aw. Woobie!" kind of way.

Additionally, I had to friend you instantly when I read your friending "policy". :-) See, that's the kind of thing I need in *my* user info!

bibliotech July 13 2006, 05:15:00 UTC

You! You wrote this, for which I shall love you forever. I actually have that page open, because I was trying to remember if I'd commented on it or not (I know I meant to, and then my computer restarted itself and I couldn't keep track of what I'd posted/what I hadn't).

No, really, I'm sane, I swear. Slightly. Kinda. Not really.

lallybroch July 13 2006, 05:19:05 UTC

See? It's fate. We are destined be superonlineBFF'S forever! ;-)

bibliotech July 13 2006, 05:28:40 UTC

Do we get to wear capes? Because the internet would be so much cooler if I could wear a cape and some superhero boots.

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bibliotech July 13 2006, 05:48:17 UTC

Aww, thank you!