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Ficlet: Voice of the Narrative

May 04, 2010 22:52

TITLE: Voice of the Narrative
AUTHOR: bibliodragon
RATING: R
PAIRING: Laura/Ellen
KINK: Brig!sex
SPOILERS: Early season 2.

( As if even more evidence was needed that little that was left of the world has turned upside down, that she has her tongue down the incarcerated (Ex? Or soon to be ex? It's hard to keep straight at this point, with Saul refusing to move his ass) President's throat has to be the most inadmissible proof imaginable. )

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Comments 10

tattooedsappho May 5 2010, 00:37:20 UTC

holy fucking GUH

i want brig sex nao plz kthxbai

bibliodragon May 5 2010, 10:07:11 UTC

Brig sex is the best sex!

icedteainthebag May 5 2010, 03:30:16 UTC

One thing she had perfect confidence in was her ability to piss people off.

So Ellen. I love it.

This was so twisty... I love that it became Laura's dream. Poor drug-addicted Laura, needing her chamalla... or maybe she shouldn't take it if she's going to have hot dreams like that. ;)

I have a real thing for brig sex so... I will be contemplating this fic for a bit! :) Heee.

bibliodragon May 5 2010, 10:09:15 UTC

Ellen's point of view is a joy to write, and you know Laura enjoyed it too ;).

frakcancer May 5 2010, 06:17:37 UTC

Bwah! Prime. Laura's really got both herself and Ellen figured out, hasn't she?

That she was a raging egotist, hopefully, any deeper meaning she didn't dare think about.

Or. as Laura once said, "If you're my subconscious, I must say you're a bit full of myself." (My new favorite Laura line.)

bibliodragon May 5 2010, 10:13:41 UTC

Heh, Laura's uncanny ability to read people is what makes her a little scary. And drugs allow that skill to manifest itself in...interesting ways ;).

And I love Laura's snarky self-depreciation that would pop up now and then.

wernotalone May 5 2010, 06:30:48 UTC

Oh that was so funny.

Poor cracked out Laura. I will never watch that moment the same way again. :)

bibliodragon May 5 2010, 10:14:39 UTC

Glad you liked. And it is possible to add porn to even the most innocent scene, though that particular one wasn't so innocent to start with ;).

scifi_mel May 5 2010, 11:42:03 UTC

YAY for Ellen Laura smut!!! This was brilliant! With dreams like that who'd need drugs?

bibliodragon May 5 2010, 16:56:35 UTC

See, that's why you should just say no!