Chocolate - Part Fourteen [FINAL]

[biancamasuda]

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin, Shige×Kusano
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple

Comments

[hecatedarkmagic]

omg, it's over *sobs* but i really enjoyed this fic of yours and this last chapter was good 'cos of the smut. kidding, i just like how everything ended. i never imagined how shigexmassu pairing could work, but you made it so real.

i applaud you for your craft and will continue reading your other fics. XD

[biancamasuda]

HAHA. OF COURSE. THE SMUT. No, it kind of totally took me like 7 hours to write the smut. I have no idea how to write it. Seriously. I was lost.

Anyway. THANK YOU. SO MUCH. SERIOUSLY. I'm glad I was able to make a Shige×Masuda pairing real for you...I'm really happy.

I'm kind of crying. I think for all the comments I get for this fic, I'm going to be really emotional. I'm so emotional right know.

Thank you! I hope to read your comments in my future/other fics <33333!!!!

[hecatedarkmagic]

i can identify with how you feel now, it's like oyu have finally finished, there's this sense of accomplishment with so many readers and such, yet you don't want it to end that soon. i'm a writer, so i guess i know.

great job for this fic. XD

[biancamasuda]

Yeah definitely...it's a total definite accomplishment. I really liked this fic. =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Thanks for everything <333

[potetofurai]

awe...its over! I liked it. Then end was really cute~!

Great job!

[biancamasuda]

Thank you for reading =DD!

I'm really glad you like it =DD!

[quinnsan]

Aww~ Cute~ I'm so glad they're happy...and well who would want to argue about that ending? I thought it was great. ^^

I'm sad that its ending...but I'm glad they had a happy ending.

[biancamasuda]

Yeah I'm REALLY sad it's ending too.

Did you know, I had another ending in which Masuda ends up with Jin AND SHIGE ENDS UP WITH NOBODY.

I knew I would never use that. But I always do like 43295723979587349257 alternate endings...and pick the one I want =D.

Thanks for reading <333333!!! I'm so happy!

[quinnsan]

EH?! I'm really glad you would never use it...though I dont' think it would change how I really liked the fic. xD Though...I'd be sad if Shige was sad that he had nobody... But I think he'd probably try and get his Massu back again~ xD

[biancamasuda]

Well Shige would have Kusano, right? So it would just be switched around.

Shige would have Kusano, and Masuda would have Jin. I'm REALLY glad it didn't work like that. Masuda and Shige are so amazing <3333.

[ceylon_miko]

YES A HAPPY ENDING! *fuzzy feelings* I was freaking out like "omg omg the last chapter is up." and all that jazz. I really like the fic and how it turned out. (Semi-sweet endings are just prefect for me.) Oh yes and thanks for throwing in some smut. hehe XDD *insert more happy rambling*

I'm so glad I got to read the ending. <333

[biancamasuda]

HAHAHA. I'm glad you like how it turned out. I just wasn't sure what I wanted to do with the ending.

The ending is so cliche, but I like it...I need Masuda×Shige to be together after all the suffering, HAHAHA.

Anyway. Your welcome about the smut. IT WAS SO HARD. WHY IS SMUT SO DIFFICULT?!?!?!?!

=DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I'm glad you got to read it too!!!!

[ceylon_miko]

Aww Massu and Shige have been through so much so they deserve to have a have a happy ending. I also found the JinxKusano thing kind of endearing as well. Maybe since Kusano is hurting and Jin has learned his lesson.

Oh smut is difficult because you have to think too much for it. XD

[biancamasuda]

Yeah they NEEDED the ending. Holy shoot. I put them through so much crap. I am such a crazy person =DDDDD.

And you're right about the smut...I mean...I DON'T HAVE GAY MAN SEX, SO HOW WOULD I KNOW HOW TO WRITE IT?! Honestly. Honestly.

[yuyamassu]

I'm kinda sad that this fic is over but at least it have a happy ending!
No one is lonely anymore!

Don't worry i'll continue to support your fics!
As long as the fics are written by you i'll read it!^^

Good Job & Well Done!*3 Cheers For YOU!*

[biancamasuda]

Awww, thanks so much! Aw man. Here come the tears. I'm glad you'll keep reading my fics! I hope you enjoy all of them! I'll try my best!

=DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!

[yuyamassu]

You're welcome!^^
Of course i will your fic is really nice!
I LOVE IT!!!!

I'm still waiting for the other fic of yours!XDDD

GANBATTE!!!

[biancamasuda]

THANKS SO MUCH! Yes, keep reading! I'll write as much as I can =D.

Because I truly love it!