Relations between Senseis Chapter 5

Aug 07, 2011 16:15

Title: Relations between Senseis ( Read more... )

iruka/gai/kakashi, writing, relations

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thebio August 9 2011, 17:31:23 UTC
This story is fantastic! I'm loving how you made Gai into more then just a loud muscle head, with feelings that consist of more than just youth.

I'm also enjoying the rather slow pacing (well, picking up in this chapter). People dont change overnight, and you seem to convey that really well with your writing.

Loving the story, keep up the great work, cant wait for the next chapter!

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bgreenwivy August 10 2011, 11:21:49 UTC
I am glad that you are enjoying it. Thank you for the review.

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khaoskomix August 15 2011, 14:35:15 UTC
Just want to say I'm loving this story. Gai is one of my favourite characters, so to see him portrayed in such an interesting way is great. Also I love poly stories, being in a triad myself. It's nice to read about other relationships a bit like mine.

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bgreenwivy August 15 2011, 14:58:47 UTC
I am glad you are enjoying it. I am trying to get the next chapter together but it is taking a bit to get the characterizations up to snuff.

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cynaga October 4 2011, 17:27:41 UTC
I am enjoying this unique story so very much~!

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