This story is fantastic! I'm loving how you made Gai into more then just a loud muscle head, with feelings that consist of more than just youth.
I'm also enjoying the rather slow pacing (well, picking up in this chapter). People dont change overnight, and you seem to convey that really well with your writing.
Loving the story, keep up the great work, cant wait for the next chapter!
Just want to say I'm loving this story. Gai is one of my favourite characters, so to see him portrayed in such an interesting way is great. Also I love poly stories, being in a triad myself. It's nice to read about other relationships a bit like mine.
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I'm also enjoying the rather slow pacing (well, picking up in this chapter). People dont change overnight, and you seem to convey that really well with your writing.
Loving the story, keep up the great work, cant wait for the next chapter!
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