#5 Theme 3: Beauty and Stupid - hide; Tora/Hiroto

Apr 26, 2009 00:12

Title: Slowly Sinking In
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 003 Beauty and Stupid (hide)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, violence, non-con, angst, memory loss
Comments: Best read at a slow pace I guess :\

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

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anarchysinomen April 26 2009, 04:53:37 UTC
I think I get it.
This has a certain deepness to it... mmmm...

And I was listening to J-core while reading. lol

XD
I'll reread it and see if it makes more sense the second time.

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 04:56:27 UTC
XD omg what is J-core?! sounds trippy.

Thanks for reading!<33333

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 05:08:49 UTC
that is WAY trippy XDDDDDD I think my mind would hurt listening to that while trying to read anything :D hahhahah ~fun

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angelontable April 26 2009, 05:41:30 UTC
This kind of reminds me of the movie Fifty First Dates where the girl suffers from short term memory loss and she lives every day over and over again. Come nightfall, her memory lapses, and she starts back at the beginning! =o

I like the obscure feeling this has. :] It's lovely. The format you wrote it in is a bit confusing, but once I reached the end I think I understood it for the most part.

Lol, and about the blue font... If you look in the CSS, there should be something that says this:
i {
font-style: italic;
font-family: georgia;
color: #BEDBDB;
}

Just remove the part that says color. xD;

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 05:46:00 UTC
LMAO THANK YOU!!!!!!
SO MUCH O_O <3

it kind of does remind you of that doesn't it XD awww that movie was hilarious and the video was really clever. I never would have thought about making a video to get someone up to date on their life~

Thanks for reading! I'll go see if I can figure out where to change it...

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 06:03:08 UTC
I made the blue darker so hopefully it's easier to read >_>
Thanks again :) And! I'm glad you liked the obscurity. I wanted to try making it so the italics were Tora's flashbacks triggered by what he sees when he comes home, but it came out confusing b/c then I started mixing the flashbacks out of order LOL

Anyways thanks<3

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k435y April 26 2009, 06:09:53 UTC
The very last line was just...wonderful. Either Hiroto got into an accident and lost his memory...or he's getting Alzheimer's at 23. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 12:23:03 UTC
LOL XDDD mysterious ne?
Maybe Hiroto will be cured someday~

Thank YOU for reading<333333

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doralice_29 April 26 2009, 09:35:07 UTC
First of all, I should rip Tora's head off for what he did to Hiroto...
And poor Pon... so he looses his memory like... everynight? *hugs him*
<3333333333333

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 12:19:31 UTC
XD yes~ Tora makes bad decisions lol
Thanks for reading<33333333333333

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doralice_29 April 26 2009, 12:52:31 UTC
LOL
btw I got this for you (it's not that nice, but still....)
http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z172/doralice29/hirotora.jpg

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 16:10:04 UTC
ROFL<3 thank you~
I saw someone with a header like this X)

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beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 16:08:55 UTC
Ahh, I'm glad you understand it<3 Tora just... he wasn't used to what was happening and people, when they're hurt or afraid, tend to lash out at the source of their problem without thinking...

Thanks for reading :)

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