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#10 Theme 22: Isolation - Mika Nakashima; Tora/Hiroto

Jun 22, 2009 22:09

Title: White Lies
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 022 Isolation (Mika Nakashima)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: smut, angst, AU
Comments: This song really just goes with this.

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

Comments 37

like_xax_majik June 23 2009, 02:51:49 UTC

T+++++++++++++++++T

beyondtheremix June 23 2009, 02:55:50 UTC

TAT I'll cry with you. Because I did cry writing the end :(

chimerari June 23 2009, 02:54:07 UTC

i think the story matches perfectly with the song..and tbh, this is the first time I actually liked a Korean song <333
I like the ending..cuz even if 2 ppl do love each other, they do sometimes drift apart

beyondtheremix June 23 2009, 02:58:06 UTC

Ahh it's true though, sadly.
I can only listen to korean songs that are like this. Bands like MoT and... idk who else lol kpop whyyyyyyyyy.

Thanks for reading and commenting<3333333

k435y June 23 2009, 03:07:06 UTC

Awww... Poor Pon. Seriously, what happened there? Tora just gave up on him just like that? *sighs* Sad K-Pop. LOL. This was awesome though. Thanks for sharing. =D

beyondtheremix June 23 2009, 03:21:58 UTC

T_T ahh Tora had been thinking about it for a while... the last time was sort of a test to see if Pon would call or say he missed him or something... something for Tora, but he failed *sigh*
Thanks for reading<3

disappear4you June 23 2009, 03:16:24 UTC

I CRIED DAMMIT!
I almost NEVER cry while ready fics, but....fuck baby this one hurt so bad!
why do I feel like Pon...Why do I know that pain so well....
*cries on the floor like a baby*

beyondtheremix June 23 2009, 03:23:31 UTC

ahhhh *holds you close*
I cried so bad at the end, writing it, rereading it.
I feel it too T_T wahhhh don't look at it!!!!!
Pretend this never existed~

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beyondtheremix June 23 2009, 04:37:50 UTC

T_T you could have waited for morning?
I keep trying to proofread it but I can't concentrate and I know the ending will make me cry so right now I don't like the writing at the beginning but but *cries with you* uwahhh where the fuck did the ending come from?!?! *sobs uncontrollably*

on a less dramatic note, I hope this isn't anonymous place #38 b/c it seems like a really sad place...

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beyondtheremix June 23 2009, 18:43:50 UTC

Ah, almost but not quite.
Who knows what the sequel could entail...
but it's reassuring to know I'm a fifth of the way through my stories at least lol

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