#7 Theme 14: Every Day at the Bus Stop - Tommy Heavenly6; Tora/Hiroto [Part 2]

[beyondtheremix]

Title: Invisible Sky [Part 2]
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 014 Every Day at the Bus Stop (Tommy February6)
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto, Shou/his mom (loooooooool), Shou/Aki, Saga/Nao/Saga
Band[s]: Alice Nine, SID
Disclaimer: Aki is not Hiroto’s brother, AU, high school fic
Warnings: mentioned drug/alcohol use, neglect
Comments: For some reason it's so

Comments

[doralice_29]

poor guys!!!
their dad is a real asshole!!!!!!!!
I really liked this story... so sweet...
Part of me would like to read a sequel, another part of me like it this way, leaving it open to imagination...
looove <33333333333333

[beyondtheremix]

XD The sequel would probably fail at life.
Thanks for reading it all the way!!!!<333333333
I know it was super long for me at least ^^;;;

[bauci]

I don't even know where to start.
The descriptions were wonderful, every word added a stroke painting a perfect picture. The attention to details made it so much more vivid. As did the characterization. I couldn't help but to love them. It's not like it was a novel length piece so how you managed to make them stand so strong with just some paragraphs... gosh. What an interesting bunch, you blended what we know and then made them our own. And Tora... He has some interesting friends and yet his character is not so out there. But he's incredibly lenient and accommodating and -gentle- and I adore him like this. I think the true beauty of this fic lies in his character and him reflecting the few days to where we get the snapshot to.

As for Pon... I was wondering what you'd make his age and like this it works. It's not crossing any lines but making the most of the situation.

This story -exactly- to my taste. Thank you for sharing.
♥
I hope you're proud because you should be ^^

[beyondtheremix]

Thank you ;_; ♥
I thought it was bothersome and long, but for all its flaws and blah of an ending you make me want to be proud of it<3

lol Tora has interesting friends because they were the only ones brave enough to put up with him XD everyone else was scared. I'm glad you noticed the ages! I tried to find out how far their year of births were to make it more reasonable. Shou, Tora, and Nao were generally the same age and so could possibly be in the same year. For Saga I found someone saying he's a year younger than those three and Hiroto, 5 years younger. I hoped it made sense as a high school fic ^^ Pon wanted to be weird and homeless, but I didn't want him to be mentally challenged lol

Thank you for always reading and commenting. Really :)

[k435y]

This was amazing. I love how Hiroto was in his own little world. I'd give anything to be like that too...well, not my home, at least. LOL. Nao's so sweet with his food and everything. LOL. And Saga's so cute with the whole puppy thing. I kinda admire Shou's own little world too. Being oblivious is bliss, I guess. Tora...hero. XD Poor Aki and Hiroto though...so much put onto them. Thanks for sharing. =)

[beyondtheremix]

Huzzah! Another reader<333333 Thanks for reading! I guess they were pretty loss in their own worlds XD I kind of wanted Hiroto to completely feel like he was playing music in his head, but I didn't want him to be too mentally challenged XDDD Thanks again for reading D:

[elenilovesyou]

omg O.O this was... amazing. so sweet and sad and fluffy and just wonderful story. I love it ~

[beyondtheremix]

I'm glad to hear it! XD
Thanks for reading♥

[beyondtheremix]

lol maybe I post when no one is looking? haha XD;;

thank you<3 it was fun to write and I'm glad you thought it made sense. I had problems working out ages and something else I don't remember right now lol, but I wanted to give homeless Pon a home and for it all to be reasonable. High school seemed like the best choice ^^

*blushes*

[beyondtheremix]

Awww<333333 It was probably when you had no internets heh sneaky post. I am happy for it too! My archive has a long list reminding me of things I have to do... omg O_O 50?! haha we will both get things done... in time...