The lemon is nearing fruition!
kirschreich , I've just e-mailed you "Habit" version 2.0 from my saeko81 at g mail dot com account -- if you have a chance to look over it, could you let me know if there's anything else I should correct / focus on? (Thank you for your help!!!)
30 pages, 4 revisions, and a helluva lotta euphemisms.
XD
How do you romance writers DO this all the time!? (Then again, maybe I'm not very creative...)