Random fic notes / ideas, ignore.
Naruto: ItaSaku
- keep it short, mind characterization
- don't 'show it all'; imply, subtlety (sort of...)
- Kakashi late for mission again. Naruto & Sasuke (Sai? Check chronology...) go to his apt to get him; Sakura also late, but they met Ino & she said she'd look around for her.
- Kakashi opens door just a bit, pretends he forgot about mission. (They don't buy.)
- K. explains he is late because Pakkun is having puppies (Naruto/Sas reply P-kun is male; Sas asks if he has a bitch in the apt; growl heard from behind Kakashi)
- K. says she is about to have puppies, he'll see them later.
- tries to close door, but Naruto wants to see puppies
- Kunai flies out door, barely misses Naruto
- K says the dog is very sensitive; closes door
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- Later, Naruto complaining about not being able to see the puppies
- S. tells him the puppies would have ripped their throats out with their monstrous strength, were probably better off not seeing them
Further plotting on SaiMono/ Sweetest Dreams:
- check out recent pics @ Saimono comm-- fab inspiration! XD
- Make use of 'damsel in distress' cliche: have Shuurei fall down (hangover/bump head/ etc?) in Min. of Finance; Kijin looks after; Reishin walks in & sees Kijin looking after Shuurei/leaning over Shuurei to tend her; Reishin goes apeshit / goes to manifest cardiac arrest like it's viral (to Shouka)...
- Rumours make it back to Ryuuki? (leads to meeting with Kijin / Shuurei?)
- Insert tender moments between R & S, K & S?...
- May need to re-write / edit parts of WIP chapters; review carefully, plot further ahead before posting...
- try and tie up this story within next 3-5 chapters, seriously...
Naruto : ItaSaku fic:
- think about characterization (very important --> chemistry, reactions)
- Naruto-verse or AU?
- Remember manners / proper behaviour
- Keep it short
- Keep it mind over-protectiveness of Team 7, defiance, loyalty, leadership... etc.