Ficlet: Invitation (Peter/Caspian)

[beyond_dream]

Title: Invitation

Pairing: Peter/Caspian

Rating: PG

Genre: Fluff

Summary: Caspian is taking a bath, Peter is hesitating, and Susan knows fully well what is coming up.

Disclaimer: No, I don’t own these lovely slashy characters.

Warning: English is not my first language and I’m too lazy to find a beta. Sorry for any mistakes.

Comments

[cocomouse123]

aww that was really cute. it's a little funny tho, to think that the whole family was there watching Caspian take bath. ^_^

[beyond_dream]

Thank you for liking it! :D

it's a little funny tho, to think that the whole family was there watching Caspian take bath.
...and the fact that Caspian didn't seem to mind at all. LOL I knew it when I wrote it that the whole situation looks kinda funny, but couldn't resist. *g*

[leander_griffin]

The tree laughing at the end is a very nice touch and I particularly like Susan's amusing comment, too. ^^

[beyond_dream]

Thank you for the lovely comment! :)
I love picturing Susan that way, always being a little annoying to her big brother with her logic and sense. LOL

[cybeleadam]

It was me with another account.
I was wondering whether you finally know if/when you can see Easy Virtue? My sister ordered the DVD from Amazon UK... Ben is just ♥ in it - so, so cute! ^^

[beyond_dream]

Oh, it's you! Hi there! :D
I just got my Easy Virtue DVD a few days ago (from Amazon UK too). Watched the blooper (love the Ben-shocked-Colin-by-trying-to-kiss-him part!) and the making-of (so few Ben...) but not the movie itself yet.

Ben is just ♥ in it - so, so cute!
Awww really! Gotta watch it over the Easter holidays!

[sugarlici0us]

I really liked it. Being a bit not educated in fanfiction, I liked it. It's really sweet and imagining the whole picture was so fun to do. And I love the way you write, I mean you put everything in the right beautiful words, I admire you so much for that !

[beyond_dream]

Oh thank you thank you for the lovely comment! Your appreciation really means a lot to me, coz English is not my first language, and I always find it somewhat challenging to translate my ideas smoothly into the language especially where literary writing is concerned. So I'm particularly happy that you like the writing of this one. Thank you once again!

[living_in_sin7]

Your writing style is pure love *__* <3 I think maybe I enjoyed your description of Caspian a littleee too much, but I'm sure Peter will forgive me. The way you keep them in character is so good too! -wants your talent-

[beyond_dream]

Ooh thank you so much! It's like one of the best reviews I've got so far. <3 Thanks a lot for liking it, and I'm really glad you enjoy the fic. It's a great encouragement to me too, as it's like the first time I ever tried to describe the looks and movement of a character in a relatively detailed way - usually I avoid doing so when writing in English coz I have no confidence in doing it rightly.

but I'm sure Peter will forgive me.
Sure he will, coz he knows his boyfriend is too hot to not have us fangirls drooling after him. XD

Thank you once again!

[living_in_sin7]

Ahaha you're most welcome n_n I pretty much raided your whole account and read everything, and ohgawd I wish I could write like you. I'm trying to persuade myself to write something Peter/Caspian that I can post up here, so hopefully I'll get some inspiration soonly. Your English is awesome too. C:

Yes, I agree, but Peter is my favourite because he's just pretty and adorable xDD

[beyond_dream]

Ooooh thanks so much hon! I'm so glad you like the fics here and it's a relief to know my English's ok. :D And doooo write some Peter/Caspian, I'm sure it'd be lovely! And the two need more love! XDD

Peter is my favourite because he's just pretty and adorable
That's why the two make such perfect pair! *sighs* XD

[delonariel]

It's so delightful and fairytale-y! You don't get enough of that with this couple, oddly enough.

[beyond_dream]

Thank you for your comment! <3
And agree with you there - these two are just too hot and cute to get enough of!