Ugh

[bewildered_dust]

Im kinda stuck in limbo

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[mouthofadesert]

the first two stanzas are my favorite. i like "Emanated by the pale doll" that too. i think the words "third eye" and "anima" kinda mess with the flow. if you thought of other ways to say them or something itd make it work better. i like this a lot though!

[bewildered_dust]

nice ill definitely work on refining it, I definitely was flowing until I hit a snag at that point, but I couldnt think of anything