Fic: This Hell We've Made (Jensen/Jared) 3b/?

[bewaretheides15]

Fandom: J2
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Rating: NC-17-- Wordcount: 9,400 (whole chapter)
Warnings: Mutant!AU, UST, angst, damaged!snarky!Jensen, empath!Jared 
Notes: So, yeah, this took a little longer than I figured,  and got long again, but here it is. I guess this is when things start to get... interesting. I'm kinda nervous about this part, hope you

Comments

[gedry]

GAH I LOVE YOU!!!

This is so well done. I love how they're on opposites sides of the same arguement. Jared with no idea why it's such a big deal to Jensen and Jensen with no idea why it's not to Jared. Then there's just miles of unexplored emotional content between them both to work through. This is such a great build up. You are doing so well with this. I hope you're proud!!!

[zubeneschamali]

Mostly he keeps getting distracted by the idea that he could bang Jared on his hands and knees in here and still be able to see his face.

Please tell me that was foreshadowing? *bats eyelashes* I'm still loving this; superhero 'verses where their abilities get in the way of the good stuff are my favorite, and you're doing a wonderful job with this one. And now I'm off to write!

[roxymissrose]

They're so--complete, personality-wise. They're so true in their reactions to who they are, if that makes sense to you. You can see under all that mess that Jensen really wants Jared beyond the sex. I guess that's the best way he can understand attachment. And Jared--ha, he's as lost as Jeff thinks he is.

Great update, thank you!

[blackpanther07]

I really love this, can't wait to see where you take this.

[gemini8]

Oh I love this so much! I am so gleeful and pleased to get more of your wonderful, wonderful, wonderful story!!
thankyouthankyouthankyou