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albeitslowly April 15 2009, 13:44:35 UTC
Hee! Sorry I didn't get right back to you. I had hooves to trim this morning. *back is broken* LOL.

Well, I've already sort of written the part where Sam comes back and finds that Dean's cut his wrists, and then Sam sorta introduces him to the Doc and stitches him up real slow without anesthetic, LOL. You could write the actual suicide attempt, but that's one of the scenes we can put in later. Since we already have a scene showing it happened, we don't need it right now.

I'd say he tries to call for help, but I[m pretty sure he suspects there's not reception up there.

You remember that scene in the movie where Adam was kinda walking around just touching things, like the tree and stuff, because they all felt so different? Maybe you could do that? Maybe he's sorta playing possum while Sam's there, but once Sam goes out for firewood or something and says he'll be back in awhile, he gets up and tries the door, thinking he'll maybe try to sneak out, but then he's so taken aback by how cold the door knob is. How sharp his stubble is, how strange the stitches feel where Sam stitched him up. I dunno if you've ever had like a really bad toothache? Like when your wisdom teeth are coming through, and the pain is just so excruciating you almost want to jam a nail through your jaw? Well, I'm thinking maybe he's running his fingers over his stitches and the sensation sorta drives him a little crazy like the worst itch he's ever had. Maybe Sam had a pen, like he was doing crosswords or sudoku or something or just plotting an evil plan, I dunno, and he left the pen, and Dean picks it up and starts digging at the stitches with it. When Sam comes back, he's really pissed about Dean marking himself up. And Dean realizes Sam thinks of him almost like a pet, like a show pony or something. That's where he starts purposely marking himself up. He might burn himself with cigarettes, tattoo himself, go all Goth and creepy. LOL. (I think the old guy had a stash of cigs, cuz I kinda have this vision of Dean sitting with a cigarette hanging out the corner of his mouth and tattooing the lines in teh back ofhis hand, lol.)

So, whattaya think? Can you work with that? The whole idea is Sam is kinda all powerful, and Dean's exerting a force against him by hurting himself.

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chocca2 April 15 2009, 14:26:19 UTC
ohh, I luuuves it, Tracy. I can def work with this! *giggles* I find it kinda funny the thought of Dean doing stuff to himself to get at Sam. I'm so sick, I know lol`Anyway, I'll have a go at this and see what happens...

p.s *rubs your broked back* Aw, poor baby

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