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Jul 29, 2005 22:48

Last night..i stayed up until like 3am writing a bunch of random things..about love..god..myself..life..and i was just thinking alot..i think this one was my best..from the notebook of bethany..ladies and gentlemen..the poem awaits..

I'm falling further.
Away from you.
Each step hurts.
Like my heart torn away..piece by piece.
I never meant to.
I'm sorry.
Can i be forgiven.
I didn't stop.
i kept doing.
Did i ever love you in the first place?
Can i come back?
Will you ever allow it?
i'm done with this.
i'm running back to you.
Give me strengh.
To believe again.
To touch your hand.
Let me, please.
Be your servant.
Once again. Inspired by Falling Further..Spoken..

hehe..i know emo..but i liked it..i am allowing postive and negitive comments about this piece so give it to me straight..<3

<3 Bethany
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