Look at Me

[betelin_notecor]

Look at Me
AS/S, rated: pg, words: ~2,500, genre: romance.

Author's Note: This is dedicated to thilia for her upcoming birthday. She gave me various prompts and I got hit with a major plot bunny from "guitar, autumn, and jealousy" so I chose to use them. For some reason the words just poured out of me on this one. Also, the song in here is based on songs I

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[thilia]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

THANK YOU!

That was sooo awesome :D:D:D And quick!

So adorable and... aw aw aw! LOL Sorry for not managing anything more coherent but I love it :D The jealousy was perfect and Albus thinking it was a dream and... just AWW.

And I LOLed at this:

Scorpius was so in love with him that James could probably fart in front of a room full of people and Scorpius would consider it beautiful.

:D Brilliant. Thank you :D

[betelin_notecor]

You're welcome~! I'm glad you liked it. :)

And thank you for the prompts! For some reason they really clicked... I've been blocking lately, and now I feel like I can actually write! XD

And that line was way too fun to write. =P

*hugs* Happy early birthday!

[aldehyde]

awh! i was in the mood for a flangsty fic and this was just perfect! i love the idea of singer!al and guitarist!james, haha ;) great job.

[betelin_notecor]

XDD Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. It was spur of the moment free writing, so I hate it, of course. XD

[aldehyde]

i was just thinking that i need a sweet little fic to read before i go off to shower, and up pops yours on my flist! i was very happy :D

you need to stop hating your work, the rest of us love it very much. HELLO, ASS CARNIVAL WINNER! *boinks you on the head*

[betelin_notecor]

Pish. It's all crap. You all just humour me. XD

And I only won because I wrote every week and used all of the prompts. It was a case of "slow and steady wins the race" not "asdfjkl amazing fic!!!!!1!!"

You know my self esteem. Some times I doubt I have any... XD (especially around PMDD time T-T)

[nolagal]

I am trapped in a long angsty fic and I needed a break and checked my flist and there this was. So adorable with singer!Albus who doesn't think he's good enough and thinking everyone wants James. Yay for Scorpius coming after Albus!

And I see above me that you doubt your superiority from the carnival- YOU ROCKED! Yes you wrote every week and used all of the prompts but you did it in a brilliant way! Every week I looked forward to This not a diary! Never doubt your brilliance!

[betelin_notecor]

XDD I'm glad it pepped you up after the severe angst! And thank you! *hugs* I have major self esteem issues. XD

[laila_rue]

oh my, that was absolutely perfect!
I really adore fics like these~ and i think the song's really cute. adding to my memories. ^____^y

[betelin_notecor]

Thank you! ♥

I'm so glad you enjoyed it that much! :)

[snarkyscorp]

"Albus laughed and shoved him away. Merlin, he loved his brother.

But not anywhere near as much as he loved Scorpius."

T___T SO CUTE AND SWEET. Lovely!

But no. Albus cannot sing. xD I just...can only see him doing it badly, like a cat wailing. lol But I'm mean. So I like your sweet versions better. <3

James on the guitar. mmm.

[betelin_notecor]

XDD I'm such a fluffy writer. And my "normal" Al can't sing. No way on earth. But it fit the plot, so I used it.

Guitar boys are too hot. Scorpius was totally lying about Al being the main attraction. It's all James muscles and the guitar. XD

*hugs* Thank you for reading! And I see your b-day is coming up soon, so feel free to send me prompts so I can write you a fic. :)

[snarkyscorp]

Yeah, no offense to Al or anything, but if a muscled hotboy James was crooning for me on guitar, I'd be all over him. Poor Al. I love him so, but hotboy James on guitar...it trumps all.

OMG I WANT A FIC YAY!! :D What would you need for a story? Do you want word prompts? Or situation prompts? And what else? :D SO. EXCITED.

[betelin_notecor]

XD What ever you wanna give me is fine. I probably won't write more than ~1,500 words for it, unless I really get hit with a plot bunny, like I did here. (Not that I don't love you enough to write something longer, but my to do list is so crazy... T-T). I won't write above an R rating either...

But if you want to see a specific scene or situation, then tell me about those and I'll see what I can do with them. Word prompts are also awesome. :) And basically any pairing is fine too. Basically just tell me what you want and I'll try to write something that matches it. Sometimes it's a little off... but I usually hit people's loves when I write from prompts. :)

And it'll be delivered close to your b-day, so you'll have to wait. XD