Daddy's Girl

May 18, 2012 16:44

Title: Daddy's Girl
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: Young Rory, Mels
Words: 1169
Author's Note: (Written from a prompt by szm "Somebody makes Mels cry and little Rory goes and sorts them out (or tries to)"

Summary: Because sometimes a man's gotta do, what a man's gotta do. Even if he's a boy.

“You’re useless! Nobody wants you. You don’t even have a ( Read more... )

angst, river song, family, *click tags for more stories -, young rory, young mels, friendship, rory williams, hurt/comfort, mels

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elisi May 18 2012, 21:57:47 UTC
Oh this was just LOVELY! &hearts ♥ ♥

ETA: It also suddenly occurred to me that after the Doctor rebooted the universe Amy always had parents, so Mels would have been the sole orphan girl...

(Tiny brit-pick: It's 'fringe', not 'bangs'. Otherwise, brilliant job!)

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betawho May 19 2012, 00:18:55 UTC
Fixed the brit-pic, thanks.

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tracy_lousia May 18 2012, 22:05:20 UTC
Lovely. You can so see Rory doing this at any age. Perfect insight.

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szm May 18 2012, 22:07:59 UTC
Rory! Oh, I do love you so. Awesome little story, thank you!

Skinny, lanky, weighing 60 pounds soaking wet, and about as offensive as a daffodil

You want to watch daffodils, they're poisonous...

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elisi May 18 2012, 22:26:38 UTC
Heck, they might kill you...


... )

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betawho May 18 2012, 23:19:23 UTC
LOL! That never even occurred to me, but you're so right.

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a_phoenixdragon May 19 2012, 03:02:14 UTC
Absolutely, screamingly perfect. And just what I needed!!

*Happy!Hugs!*

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amilyn May 20 2012, 02:52:42 UTC
This is so incredibly beautiful. Rory beating up Justin, Justin's dad getting the message after the "school dweeb" beat up his kid, Rory defending HIS kid...without even knowing...and Mels telling him to be a nurse. LOVELY.

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