A Very Good Day

[betawho]

Title: A Very Good Day
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 11th Doctor, Amy, Rory, River Song
Words: 1369

"This is never going to work!" Rory whispered.

"It will if you'll quit dawdling. Come on, River is keeping him distracted." Amy crept silently past the lower door to the console room, hunched over and tiptoeing like the burglar in some old comic

Comments

[betawho]

Epilogue: The sidewalk painting the Doctor made with Amy's chalks was a masterpiece. A multicolored Mandala worthy of the great Indian masters. He wore his scarf, his red checkered robe and his bunny slippers while drawing it, crawling on the ground. It covered twelve square feet of concrete on the beachside esplanade.

In the end, he was arrested for indecent exposure when he lost one of the bunny slippers. Naked feet were considered extremely erotic on Valeshan. Fortunately, his scarf exploded while he was being escorted away by police, and they were able to make their escape.

[dqbunny]

*snicker* The epilogue was just as good as the fic.

[acciochocolate]

OHG! LOL!

[firefly124]

ROFLMAO!!! Love it!

[sharp2799]

"Oh, mummy, I don't have to use my lipstick on him," River smiled, and sashayed down the stairs past them. The Doctor's eyes tracked her like a magnet.

LOL!

[acciochocolate]

Hilarious! Esp. the scarf! But Rory's gift was rather wonderful. :)

[beadattitude]

Lovely. And always quiet Rory with the dearest, dearest things.