Planet of the Dead REVISED p.2

[betawho]

(Here's part 2, it was too long for one post, so I had to split it in half. Part 1 is here.)

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Still inside the alien ship's control room.

A gaseous nebula floats in the air, a hologram.

Doctor: "The Scorpion Nebula. We're just where you wanted, so far away." The scene changes to a beautiful green and blue globe. "The planet San Helios."

Comments

[dommiesgrl]

You know, I don't really remember the particulars of Planet of the Dead; so, I can't really pinpoint why this version is so much better. I just remember not liking the original very much, and really enjoying yours! Thanks for making this so much better, in my opinion.