When a Prison isn't a Prison

[betawho]

Title: When a Prison isn't a Prison
Author: betawho
Rating: G
Characters: 11th Doctor, Companion, River Song
Words:  892

Summary: The Doctor's Companion is incensed to learn that the Doctor has left his wife in prison. But, he explains, he and his wife aren't like other people, and what may seem a prison, is nothing but an illusion...

Comments

[a_phoenixdragon]

GUH.

*FLAILS*

*Makes incoherent, mono-syllabic noises*

GUH

*Squishes you*

[scandalbaby]

Seriously, I had never thought of their relationship like this, but this? This is perfect. The analogy you used is so perfectly fitting them. This is now part of my personal canon. ::nods::

[captain91]

wow, you gave me chills, that was incredible

[lonewytch]

This is lovely. Some really beautiful lyrical descriptions in here. I love the way you describe the companion's reaction to him as he sits down and begins explaining to her. And i LOVELOVELOE the descriptions of River
"You don't cage an eagle. You don't hold fire in your fist. My wife is a River, it flows over and around all obstacles, it wears down what dares to obstruct it, drowns what will not give way. You can't dam it, control it, or contain it.",

I love that bit. You really get across his love for her, her wildness, his respect for that. Great piece.

[storywriter84]

I LOVE THIS!!