Spoilers (A River Fanfic)

[betawho]

Title: Spoilers
Characters: River Song
Rated: PG

River could feel the pressure rising under her skin. She slapped him. Hard. She had just seen him dead, the damned man. All she wanted to do was grab him and hold on until the shaking stopped. To kiss him with all the years of love and pain and joy they'd shared.

But she couldn't. He was too early for

Comments

[captjackspeanut]

Fantastic! I could feel her emotion pouring out from the screen and it really tugs. I love these two so much and the more I think about their lives the more I want to rip my hair out and cry. But thank goodness it's too early in the morning and I am way too lazy. :-)

I always enjoy your writing!

[a_phoenixdragon]

Ohhh, RIVER.

This fic...this whole thing. YES.

*Clings*

[shadowturquoise]

Great story! Alex beautifully plays that scene so that you just know there are a million thoughts and emotions warring inside her at once. Your story brilliantly captures exactly what I bet she was thinking.

[promethia_tenk]

Oooo--there was so much going on in that moment, but I think you've managed to unpack it beautifully.

[dali_muse]

11th Doctor/River breaks my heart so much.

Thank you for this. Love it and will save it to my memories.