Comments | betawho: Youth is Wasted on the Young p.23

betawho

Youth is Wasted on the Young p.23

Jun 10, 2011 16:54

Dawn dawned to find everyone standing in line out of the mansion kitchen door, awaiting their cup of coffee and sweet roll. Janet was whipping her soldiers into order, packing all their gear onto three stealth shielded choppers. The choppers would drop their loads, then stand off as guards, while the others set up the substation ( Read more... )

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tempusdominus10 June 11 2011, 19:02:51 UTC

OOOOOOO
It GOt him!

woo poor him! Hope he does the hand thing.

shadowturquoise June 12 2011, 05:32:08 UTC

I can't believe you left it right there! You've been taking cliff-hanger lessons from Moff haven't you? Another excellent chapter!

betawho August 24 2011, 20:27:47 UTC

Hah! I just realized your icon of Rory looks like he's riding a motorcycle, with the way he's holding that sword! :D

Thank you for the compliment, I've tried to make the story exciting.

othermewriter June 15 2011, 05:24:25 UTC

EEEEEEEP! NOOOOO it got Rory! Sighhhhhh whimper now I have to wait to see what happens! hits refresh!hits refresh!hits refresh!hits refresh!hits refresh!hits refresh!hits refresh!hits refresh!