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Finder's Peepers - (11th Doctor, Clara)

Oct 29, 2013 16:08

Title: Finder's Peepers
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 11th Doctor, Clara Oswald
Words: 938
Author's Note: This is my first attempt to write Clara.

Summary: Sometimes the Tardis can be so uncooperative. But as Clara learns, sometimes it has reason...( Read more... )

Comments 7

flowsoffire October 29 2013, 21:13:34 UTC

XD adorable, adorable Clara! I love it. Giggle-worthy ;) Your take on the TARDIS' attitude to her was very fun too!

betawho October 29 2013, 21:14:19 UTC

This story was partially inspired by this picture by MikazukiRisa on DeviantART.

justascrewup2 October 30 2013, 02:12:33 UTC

Oh, love the pic too! Thanks for the link and for writing this lovely fic to go with it :)

jackdavfan692 October 29 2013, 23:13:18 UTC

Haha, love it :D! It's a good thing they weren't already doing something, ahem, adult when Clara saw them ;). Love the TARDIS doing her best to steer Clara away from them :P.

Also (and I don't know if you were worried about it at all), you got Clara and her interaction with the TARDIS spot-on, I think :). *Nods*

justascrewup2 October 30 2013, 02:10:54 UTC

This was brilliant :) Great Clara/Tardis interaction and I love that the Tardis was trying to keep Clara away from something she didn't particularly want to see in the end. Bonus points for River/Eleven, although the timeline for this hurts my brain if I think about it too hard (I have my own head canon).

priarani560 October 30 2013, 13:56:27 UTC

Wonderful!