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Planning by Firelight - (4th Doctor)

Jul 22, 2013 22:25

Title: Planning by Firelight
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 4th Doctor
Words: 697

Summary: The Doctor has been to many worlds, seen many sights, fought many enemies, and made many friends. And one thing he has learned. Never judge by appearances. And never underestimate the locals.He was sitting nonchalantly by the fire. A long-limbed, ( Read more... )

Comments 8

betawho July 23 2013, 17:08:18 UTC

raingirl26 -

don't know what the etiquette is for comments on fan fic, but i will say that i was drawn into this story with its well thought out wording and intriguing story line. i want to read more.

fannishliss July 23 2013, 21:37:55 UTC

I liked this portait of Four among an alien tribe. I wanted to know more about what would happen next! The story drew me in right away. :)

justascrewup2 July 23 2013, 23:25:33 UTC

Interesting. Is there a part two? I want to know how they defeat the Sontarans and if he can heal the baby.

betawho July 24 2013, 01:56:00 UTC

As of right now, I intended it to be a one-shot. I tried to include enough information and clues so that the reader can get an idea of what the Doctor's plan is.

jjpor July 24 2013, 22:14:48 UTC

Some Sontarans in for an unpleasant surprise by the sounds of it. ;)

This line in particular struck me as supremely Four-like: Too much reverence gives me a nosebleed.

a_phoenixdragon July 24 2013, 22:57:13 UTC

Ohhh, if you have more, I would lovelovelove to read it!