Up a Tree (p.16)

[betawho]

Jute snapped up his rifle, both Trelwins turned to stare intently at him, Amy jumped forward and shoved the rifle up, twisting it out of Jute’s hands. “No!”

“But he killed my uncle!” Jute yelled,

Comments

[dali_muse]

Ooh, you always stop at the good parts! Great read!

[hilandmum]

The pace of this hasn't slackened. In fact, it gets more exciting with each chapter. Thanks for another good chapter.

[lyricwrites]

I just wanted to drop by and say that I have a cast-iron narrative kink for those times when the Doctor suddenly shows someone that he's not just the silly young man you'd think at first glance, so I like this chapter very much. Also, this story has a hell of a way with the cliffhangers. Moving on to the next one, will be back later . . .

[othermewriter]

EEEEP oh dear not good!

[anonymous]

Again, still keeping me up past bedtime... but I have to stop here for the night and get some sleep... Most likely will dream of huge trees, big monster and monkey like creatures and oh ya the doctor... Loving it.. later..