Fic for tailoredshirt

Dec 16, 2009 21:32

For: tailoredshirt
From: ozma_katiebell
Title: Whatever Happens
Rating: R
Word Count: 9000
Summary: Life after the war didn’t turn out quite the way Ron expected. But perhaps that isn't such a bad thing after all.
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. *sigh*
Warnings: Harry/George, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Ron/OFC mentioned
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tailoredshirt December 17 2009, 22:51:04 UTC
Oh my god! I'm so sorry! I didn't check my flist properly today and was utterly distracted, and I can't even read this now, but I will be back tonight! Harry/George, yay! :D Please no one reply to this comment, as I will probably just edit it.

Thank you in advance! :*

ETA: Okay, I'm back! I love the set-up for what happened with them after the war, with Harry and Ginny breaking up quietly and Harry joining the Aurors ahead of Ron, and this: in the end she chose the Department of Mysteries. It made perfect sense, now that he thought about it. She’d always been fascinated by puzzles, and there in the middle of London was the biggest one he could think of. I loved that line and can imagine this for her.

I loved George's reaction to Ron finding them together! Good for him, being so unashamed and defiant. ♥

It seemed as if Ron didn’t matter, wasn’t good enough to fight, wasn’t good enough to confide in, didn’t deserve honesty, didn’t deserve a proper defense - Ugh, Ron. ♥ That felt really in character!

I really loved all of the Gryffindor boys (minus Harry) living together and hanging out. Poor Neville with his dad. :(

Ahhh, I love the Daydream charm! Harry tucked his head under Ron’s chin, and Ron’s arms automatically tightened against him in response. :((( ♥

This Harry, whoever he was, clearly adored him, and this Ron, whoever he was, loved him just as much in return, and somehow, as strange and out of character as it felt, it felt sort of warm and familiar and very, very right. YES THIS. I loved that whole paragraph so much!

If he was going to name the best thing he ever felt he might have mentioned the moment that he pulled Harry out of that frozen pool and realised he was going to be forgiven. Or the moment that he realised that Harry was only pretending to be dead. Or the time he realised that he was the thing that Harry would miss the most--that he, Ron Weasley, loser extraordinaire--was the most important person in the world to another individual. lkasjd oh Ron! ♥

“It was bad,” he said, grimacing as he remembered. “She accused me of using her as a substitute for-” aklsjdlasjd

Ugh, that whole conversation at the end was full of so many great best mates-y lines. And who cares about filthy smut (which was in there, yay! and was super hot!) when you get them being angsty best friends who love each other so much? :( Thank you so much! I loved this a lot and can't wait to find out who you are! ♥

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ozma_katiebell January 3 2010, 02:18:23 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked! Any excuse to throw in George!

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