FIC for endure

Dec 03, 2008 20:20

For: endure
From: hpuckle
Title: Supersensory Charm
Rating: R
Summary: The twins give Ron an interesting gift for Hermione, but he accidentally uses it on somebody else.
Word Count: 2781
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endure December 4 2008, 01:50:42 UTC
Aww, yay!

This is absolutely wonderful! Not to mention this came on the perfect day...I totally needed some great Harry/Ron today.

I loooooooved the frottage scene. Very, very hot.

And I loved the twin-ly interference. And that they have no idea what they did. Love it.

But omg, I have to tell you I about shot imaginary milk out of my nose at the McGonagall line. So great.

And I actually love the way you wrote this...how it could be one-time or the start of something more. I actually definitely love my Harry/Ron that way...it seems very canon-y.

This is absolutley wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Cute and realistic and just great.

Thank you so much, secret sexy elf! This made my day, and it's even better than I could have thought!

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hpuckle December 29 2008, 01:56:46 UTC
Thanks so much. I was so scared that you weren't going to enjoy it and this comment made me so happy!

xxx

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triomakesmehot December 4 2008, 02:35:02 UTC
The twins at their finest!

But this bit nearly did me in:

"Well, judging by how often you shout Mcgonagall's name in your sleep, I'd say you like a bit of old lady."

"Fuck off," Harry laughed, embarrassed by his uncontrollable teenage fantasies. The lads in the dormitory had been teasing him about it since the beginning of the year.

Harry's kinda channeling Dan there, with his preference for "older" girls.

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hpuckle December 29 2008, 02:00:01 UTC
Hehe, glad you liked it. The line about old lady occured to me after I'd already wrote that part and I had to go back and re-do it to fit it in lol.

xxx

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slantedknitting December 4 2008, 03:25:24 UTC
Ah! This is so good! Coming in their pants. Classy. Haha. Loved it.

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hpuckle December 29 2008, 02:00:45 UTC
Haha, yes classy is right! :P

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

xxx

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simons_flower December 4 2008, 03:59:20 UTC
Very nice! And a bit of humor with the McGonagall line.

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hpuckle December 29 2008, 02:01:15 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

The McGonagal line is one of my favourite things about it too!

xxx

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ms_worplesdon December 4 2008, 06:08:12 UTC
Yum! :D

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hpuckle December 29 2008, 02:01:41 UTC
Hehe, short and sweet. Thank you, my love!

xxx

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