Oct 22, 2008 04:10
I already posted this a few places but i'll post this here anyways. thought it was pretty odd yet really interesting at the same time...had me kind of freaked out when i woke up.
"The Cummune"
it was me, two of my cousins, and four friends. we were walking back from a party, and we needed advice from the neighbor i guess, so we walked over to her house and rang the doorbell. she opened the door, she was about 5'7,curly redish brown hair that went to her shoulders. nice fit body and wearing a white robe. we hurried inside since it was cold.
She brought us downstairs towards the cellar and as soon as we walked in the other side of the door she locked it and it was like walking into a torture chamber. i was both frightened and turned on symultaneously. all of a sudden out of literally no where, the room(it was a huge room) is filled with people, and we don't know what to do except try and huddle as close together as possible. being without anything to defend yourself but your body, you feel very weak in a situation like this. they were going to eat us. we'd accidentally stumbled upon a canibalist comune..
so our neighbor,her name was judith,comes down the stairs and has the biggest most wretched smile i have ever seen on anyone's face. she looks at us and welcomes us to her comune and says she hopes we're hungry. the three men closest to us come over(they're obviously her top men) and move us to the next room where we are put into a line and they make us put on black leather gloves. i accidentally grabbed two left pairs and made the mistake of speaking. one of her henchmen told me to shut up and find the right glove. i said no, fuck off.
this angered him obviously. "what did you say bitch?" and he whips out a knife from his pocket and starts slicing my arm back and forth."i'm sorry! i'm sorrrry! please stop, oh god that hurts you're fucking hurting me."
"jasper, what are you doing? it isn't time to play yet you ass. disobedience is met with punishment." and as quick as a flash she kicks him over,he falls over onto a grater.his spine is stuck and bent in two places, and she cuts his head off in two clean cuts. then she points to his knife, points to me. and it's then clear to me that she wants me to use it on him. so i pick it up. the adreneline is surging through me. this has been something i've been wanting to do for so long. i'm shivering as i place his head in my lap. i place the knife gently under the bottom of his left eye, using my finger to hold back his eyelids. i'm shaking so bad the knife slips and it breaks a small hole into the top right corner of the iris. puss and blood starts to pour out like jelly. "FUCK"..one left..i take a breathe,close my eyes, and slowly reach the knife under the right eye. slowly...slowly...
and just when i think it's going to burst, it starts to give, and i'm able to ever so slightly start scooping it out with my fingers. the blood giving it a soft moist texture against my warm fingers. i tenderly cut out the back of the neurons and hold the eye in my palms like a tiny egg. a precious baby egg, and i am it's mother,it's protector. all i can do is stare,adoringly,lustfully,curiously. it is mine. my own..mypre(just kidding)and just as quickly i snapped out of it. i wanted the brain. but as i started to cut into jasper's skull,judith lashed out at me,jumping on top of me and pinning me down with incredible strength. the knife fell from my hand and my arms were useless.
maliki and tristan, her other two men, all encircled, suddenly looking very hungry. infact what i hadn't known,was while i had been performing my "eye surgery" one of my cousins and two of my friends had been dragged away by several members in the commune, and already some were becoming meals to this twisted and sick souls. bit by bit they were getting eaten away,made sure to be kept alive the entire time.
just at that same moment judith bit into my neck with her jagged teeth. it pierced through my skin like fire and ice. i could not move. i thought i would die but then police stormed in. they arrested everyone. they managed to save two other people. one person was half alive with her lungs barely in tact and pieces of her legs spwen across the floor in so many chunks that you couldn't even chew on it. there were also sharp rotating devices sewn inside her stomach.
i begged the police not to put the cannibals into a jailcell..for i knew they'd somehow devour the people inside and get out. and once they did they would come after me. but no one listened. no one listened.
it was 7 months to the day. it was a cool fall afternoon and i'd gone for a walk. i'd stopped for some sun chips and cookies because they are just so damn good. i got inside and as soon as i got inside my room a knife is held to my throat. i can't scream because the blade is pointed so far against my skin it would puncture it. instead i jab her stomach with my elbow and run for the door but she grabs my ankles. her nails dig deep into my skin as she claws her way up my body. all the while she is stabbing me over and over with the knife in her hand. it is agonizing. she is trying to carve me up, carve me up into little shapes until nothing is left but dust,blood and fragments of skin. my survival instincts kick in and i dig into her face with my nails, biting into her shoulders as hard as i can. all the while throwing anything at her to get distance between us. i manage to squeeze away long enough to get to my living room window. and with my last bit of strength i jump out, breaking my leg..
[wakes up]
soo yea, it's 4am, still awake. tomorrow i hang out with my cousin bethany at panera for lunch then studying for my baking test. funnn. im thirsty for tea,...