WEEKLY DRABBLE/SKETCH CHALLENGE ONE HUNDRED

[aralias]

Hello, yes. Welcome to the ONE HUNDREDTH WEEKLY DRABBLE/SKETCH CHALLENGE*! On this day, the day of the ONE HUNDRETH WEEKLY DRABBLE/SKETCH CHALLENGE** we have decided to do something different. This idea largely courtesy of x_los. We would like the com to collectively write/draw:

ONE HUNDRED DRABBLES AND/OR SKETCHES. I have a lovely table that I yoinked

Comments

Human

[elviaprose]

At age sixteen, when Yana first lets his fingers slide through a girl’s hair, he thinks, “this isn’t something I do.” Then he laughs to himself and keeps going, used to such thoughts.

Restored to himself, the Master returns to memories of touching, tasting, thrusting. He shivers. His people don’t touch like that. Be that as it may. He’s trapped on a planet with six billion humans and he’s the Master and he'll do as he pleases.

“Have you got any kinks, Harry?” Lucy asks him on their fifth date. “Anything naughty you’d like to try?” He doesn’t. Just fucking like a human is naughty enough to send him almost instantly to the edge of pleasure. “Not choking, or biting? No role play? Not playing doctor? I'm good at that one,” she tells him. “What?” He spits out his tea. “What is that?” he asks. She answers. “Boring,” he says.

Why would anyone want to play doctor? Such a silly little game. His version would be so much better. Play human with me, Doctor, he’d say. And oh, would it be good.

Re: Human

[tierfal]

I love this! So tightly-written; you don't waste a word, and it tells an incredibly expansive story in a really short space.

Also, HELLA sexy. :D I love the central concept of humanity as a kind of perversion all of its own, and the insight that gives into the Master's psyche… Damn, just awesome. You rock!

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

Thanks so much! This review absolutely made my day :D

Re: Human

[narwhale_callin]

Awesome! :D

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

Thanks! :D

Re: Human

[bagheera_san]

What tierfal said - this is wonderfully precise and economically written and not a word out of place.

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

So glad you think so! <3 I hope you'll consider writing a drabble for this challenge. I do love reading your writing.

Re: Human

[dragonofmemory]

Very lovely.

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

Thanks! Right back at you. I love your drabble, although it makes me want to bang Five's head against something.

Re: Human

[dragonofmemory]

Thanks! Five does make me feel that reaction occasionally... No, seriously I adore him. When he's working with me. Which is like, never. -_-;;; Probably explains why it took me so long to get those few sentences at the end out.

Re: Human

[badflameb]

lol Play human with me....I would love to see that, brilliant.

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

Glad you found that amusing! <3

Re: Human

[tweedymcgee]

Oh, bravo, bravo.

be that as it may

I hear Simm's voice clear as a bell on this line. Good stuff.

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

Thanks so much! :D

Re: Human

[aralias]

really like this, by the way. i thought so when you posted it, but forgot to say anything. and then forgot to say anything - but it's really nicely constructed and funny and interesting :D i like it as a lead in to a larger fic as well - which is not to say WRITE IT NOW just that i like this idea. well done indeed!

Re: Human

[elviaprose]

What a nice comment! It's great to know that you liked it so much :D :D