Ohhhh I can't wait to see the end of this! i love reading TaoxKris! I can't wait to see if Kris forgiven Tao and then they go have nice babies together! Haha XD
I really can't handle situations like that, and reading while hiding behind your arms doesn't really work ... Tao bby <'''3 whyy. Um, yeah. I liked this, and I'm really looking forward to part two. The masturbation scene was really intense, maybe because I was dying from what I knew was about to happen (I seriously can't handle secondhand embarrassment, lol), but apart from that it was also really hot.
And the end was really heartbreaking btw. I like that you didn't jump straight to the Taoris (who I'm assuming will happen in the next chapter), and Tao crying and thinking it wasn't worth it made this story ... more realistic, maybe? It was a good ending at least C:
omg this is so good. i love your writing style! the way you picture the characters is awesome as well. i seriously can't wait to read part 2 *-* thanks for sharing your work :)
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Get off twitter and start writing. *nod*
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the way you picture the characters is awesome as well.
i seriously can't wait to read part 2 *-*
thanks for sharing your work :)
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