Comments | bert_and_gerard: Chapter 2 of those 3 last words

dark_dreamer123 in bert_and_gerard

Chapter 2 of those 3 last words

Sep 15, 2006 18:54

Title: Those Three last words...
Author: Dark_dreamer123
Pairing: Gerard/Bert
Rating: NC-17
POV: Bert's POV
Chapter:1/10
Summary : Bert wakes up one day to realize that his world is forever changed.
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue
Author Note:Warning this has rape mentions of drugs and drinking. If you have any problems with it then tell me or plain and ( Read more... )

those three last words

Comments 15

silhouettes1 September 15 2006, 23:03:55 UTC

Hi, You should make sure to put in a link to chapter one as well (and in the future, all of the previous chapters) so that readers who find this stopry as you've progressed in writing will be able to go back and read from the start.

If you need any help adding that link any of us nmods can help you out, just let us know!

Heather // MOD

dark_dreamer123 September 15 2006, 23:07:09 UTC

I knew I forgot something. Thanks Heather :)

silhouettes1 September 15 2006, 23:09:53 UTC

no problem.. that's why they call me "mod" ... actually.. they call me mod because Mandie said so... and really most people don't call me that.... so um... that's why i get to make pretty MOD posts and tag the entries and write "//MOD" after my name when I leave cool comments like this one... yup

Heather //dumb

dark_dreamer123 September 15 2006, 23:12:34 UTC

hahaha u r a cool MOD.

darkpopsicle37 September 16 2006, 00:02:43 UTC

this was fecking great!

dark_dreamer123 September 16 2006, 00:15:36 UTC

Thanks!

vampiraxlibby September 16 2006, 02:00:07 UTC

That was fucktastic. Mmm, i feel like an Italian after watching Rocky.

dark_dreamer123 September 16 2006, 02:06:45 UTC

Thanks! Im glad u liked it.

emily_copyright September 16 2006, 06:09:40 UTC

I can't help it...

It took six whole hours, and five long days for all your lies to come undone. And those three small words were "way" Too" "late" but you can't see that I'm the one.

I have no idea if that's what you got the title from but I love you if it is!
haha.

Nice story.
You're doing a great job.

dark_dreamer123 September 16 2006, 16:32:17 UTC

lol no I didn’t get it from that song.

I cannot really tell anyone where I did because...it would give it away.

Isn’t that a Josie and the pussycat’s song? I’m sure it is *has the movie*

Thanks for your comment!

xaprilgreyx September 16 2006, 18:38:47 UTC

wow wow wow! I'm really getting into this now. Keep up the good work!

dark_dreamer123 September 16 2006, 18:45:25 UTC

Thanks! Im glad ur getting into it. :)