Comments | bert_and_gerard: Challenge 1, Prompt 2: Fog

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Challenge 1, Prompt 2: Fog

Jul 31, 2006 23:20

Title: Out In The Cold
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out in the cold

Comments 5

rurouni_yasha July 31 2006, 13:38:54 UTC

wow.....

I liked how you used the fog, maybe it's just me, but was it to represent how their relationship became foggy and Gerard couldn't see anymore, he thought the picture was still the same?

Great job! *thumbs up*

soulsdisband August 1 2006, 05:42:46 UTC

Yeah. You got it! (I love when people understand these ramblings.)
:D Thanks!

cafesapphism July 31 2006, 21:11:26 UTC

Ohh... That was amazing. I read it three times trying to find something to be critical about, and I just couldn't.

The ending was perfect and... I mean, it was bad because they're meant to be together, but it was so beautiful...

This whole thing was, really.

Sorry about the lack of con-crit. I can't really think of any criticism, constructive or otherwise.

soulsdisband August 1 2006, 05:43:54 UTC

Thank you v. much!
I'm beginning to think I don't write because I enjoy it, but instead for comments like these. :P
Thanks!

bleed_heroin August 2 2006, 19:06:26 UTC

this is really pretty.

♥

it makes me sad.