[Fanfic] Slavefic 3/3

Feb 15, 2013 21:28

Warnings: This is a slave fic, but not as creepy as they usually go. Weird content, a bit of violence, lots of tears and screaming (but no sexual abuse at all, in case you're wondering)
Pairings: Luciana/Martina.
Summary: Luciana is hired to take a slave to the mines. WILL SHE BE ABLE TO DO IT?

last chapter )

fanfiction, latin hetalia, genderbend, br/arg

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zulenha February 15 2013, 23:59:20 UTC
NEM ACREDITO QUE VOCÊ DEU UM FINAL FELIZ PRA ALGUÉM <333 Tá evoluindo, hein owo <3

As duas são tão lindas, e o internal struggle da Lulu é tão óbvio que OF COURSE a Martininha saberia que ela nunca a deixaria ser escrava uwu Coração de manteiga mole~ Vai morrer pobre e endividada, coitada

A FAMÍLIA DA TININHA É RICA ENTÃO ELES QUE DEVIAM PAGAR O PREJUÍZO DA LULU I'M JUST SAYING

e ela tem que casar com a Tina e usar vestidos lindos pra sempre <3333333333

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vc usou o icon proibido DDDD8 berseker February 20 2013, 18:31:20 UTC
IM ALL ABOUT THEM HAPPY ENDINGS

Essa crush da Lulu em pessoas loirinhas e cabeçudas e teimosas ainda vai acabar com ela ;33333; shush u ela será bem sucedida vendendo mate e produtos a base de dulce de leche todos vão querer okay

e elas vão dormir juntas todo dia pq agora acostumou e ela poderá agarrar a Tininha todas as noites \o/

GRACIAS BABY 4 EVERYTHINGS

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ilye_aru February 16 2013, 01:30:24 UTC
WHAT DID YOU JUST DO TO MY HEART YOU WITCHHHHHHH

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

this fic was SUPER SUPER AMAZING and i suffered and cried and i worried about them and wanted to slap them and they are so cute and i just FELL IN LOVE WITH TINITA and the lady kisses sdflgjhsfihufh THEY WILL BE HAPPY FOREVER AND AND BABIES ;AAA;

/explodes!!1!!

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berseker February 17 2013, 21:19:14 UTC
/CUDDLES YOUR HEART 4EVER

I'm so glad you liked it, Kassinha, Tininha is a precious doll and should be cuddled forever so she'll be quiet ehehe happy. Also BESITOS owo

gracias for commenting, baby <3<3

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cucolla February 16 2013, 11:01:16 UTC
OMG this is so good. Also, happy ending, I wasn't expecting that but it was great how Luciana have plans to stay working in her River and the reunion part when they cry and Martina's fear when they reach her city. All was perfect and Luciana intern dilemma was the best. I liked that I never could rally stand Martina which is great because she is so IC I was rooting for her, I wanted her to be ok but I also wanted her to shout up for a second XDDD This fic is really epic I love how you write her emotions.

Thanks ;)

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berseker February 17 2013, 21:42:20 UTC
Thank you so much! I always worry when I post the last chapter of something, I fret over disappointing everyone orz

And Martinita deserved her happy ending with Luci (probably ?) by her side... she's a difficult princess, and Luci happens to have a soft spot for the kind, apparently :3

thank you so much for commenting, you made me really encouraged to post it to the end! <3<3<3

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A wild OXIOSA appeared! oxiosa February 18 2013, 17:25:57 UTC
... you know, I reeeeeeeeally like how both train of thoughts very different, and yet very coherent ( ... )

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/CAPTURES THE WILD OXI \o/ berseker February 21 2013, 19:41:03 UTC
Eeeh I'm glad you liked it!

And yeeeeess I loved reading your analysis, I wanted both sides to come across and I was afraid of messing it up, because Luci is... idk, a bit complicated. The fact that she's willing to take Tininha to the sucky mines, but still tries to be nice. So I'm really happy it worked, and yeah it made poor Martina so confused (eheheh she is very naughty, the little rebel baby).

And who could not love Martina? :3 their lives were probably super boring without her around ^^

thank you so much for commenting! <3 /hugs

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sipmiau March 13 2013, 01:41:35 UTC
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HAPPIEST MOST LOVELY DISNEY ENDING EVER I LOVE IT <333333333333333333333 Eeeee I did NOT see the end coming I was pouting at the screen 3/4 of the fucking fic really Luciana why do you always have to try to feel so strong and mean we all know you're a loving caring CUTIE sdogissdgo <33333

And Martinita feeling all ugly and miserable but standing brave like the very crazy fucker she's always been <333333 But then she sees Luci is a soft ray of sunshine and would never hurt her 8 ( ... )

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berseker March 14 2013, 17:41:19 UTC
OWO see, I can make happy endings sometimes <3 even if Lulu is stubborn and Tininha is even worse and they’re silly babies who can’t behave. Luci wants to be a badass, ok, let her be, Tininha can’t have all the fun

And noooo of course I don’t enjoy anything of the sort, I want to see her being happy and cuddled and loved owo (also it’s your fault, you said you didn’t want to see her being rich, it’s not my fault you want to make her cry…. Even if she was rich in the end… oh)

Also shush you, I love babbling <3 and long comments are the best comments, this is a fact ( ... )

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sipmiau March 15 2013, 14:17:29 UTC
IS THE ONLY WAY TO NOT BE RICH TO BE A SLAVE?? You're a little extreme, honey. And btw yes Tina is the most badass here, she's awesome owo

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berseker March 15 2013, 17:13:26 UTC
OF COURSE :D

And anyway she got a girlfriend in the end, sort of, so she shouldn't complain <3

she's a badass baby :3

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