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benevolent_rain

(Naruto) Apolaustic

Sep 29, 2007 19:23

Title: Apolaustic
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Deidara, Tobi, Sakura
Genre: Drama, Suspense.
Warnings: Language, some violence, possible manga spoilers for those who haven't read past chapter 354.
Word Count: 3584
Notes: Just something that came to me one day. Also. I fail at teh dramas. And apolaustic means “devoted to seeking enjoyment.”
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naruto, sakura, fanfic, deidara, tobi

Comments 13

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benevolent_rain September 30 2007, 00:09:14 UTC

; ; you are too sweet and awesome. I'm so glad you liked and thank you for the betaing.

korinacaffeine September 30 2007, 01:08:21 UTC

I like~

:D

benevolent_rain September 30 2007, 01:09:54 UTC

:D I'm glad!

lone_gothic September 30 2007, 02:16:26 UTC

Oh, awesome, awesome.

... OMG PHOE-CHAN. OMG. OMGOMGOMG. Holy shit, you are brilliant. Beyond brilliant, so much that words aren't enough. ♥

... moving onto the story. Ahem. A very plausible brief diversion of what might have happened if the manga wasn't completely about Sasuke, and you're probably one of the few (and best) to go 'what if Dei+Tobi didn't find Sasuke first'. And it is good, everything from Deidara's reason to even want to meet up with Sakura (and a great one at that) to the ending. Which is on fire. And you ended it with a bang on a high. Yes. A brilliant high.

*memories*

Favourite line? “Oh, the irony of it all! But if he had to go in such a way, it was only suiting…” Love to Tobi. And everything else, especially Deidara being happy-yay-OMG-GOOD-ART. And Tobi, who is adorably dorky evil love. ♥

Mmm, yes. Definitely awesome.

benevolent_rain September 30 2007, 02:21:48 UTC

/if the manga wasn't completely about Sasuke' -LOL. Oh you are so, so right.

Your comment leaves me full of warm-fuzzy feelings ; ;. I'm so glad you liked it (and Tobi! That was my first time writing for him.)!

Thank yooooou~~~! ♥

x5_313050983415 September 30 2007, 03:20:26 UTC

I've been looking for a Deidara-centered fic to read, and the fact that you have Tobie down and post!training with Tsunade Sakura with her new founded badassed-ness, is awesome. Deidara and his demented self is perfect. I love him. Thank you!!

benevolent_rain September 30 2007, 04:42:36 UTC

You're welcome. I'm glad you liked it!

shaitanah September 30 2007, 15:07:59 UTC

OMG! That was awesome! Deidara is brilliant and this slightly darkish Sakura is amazing! And I think I love Tobi)))

benevolent_rain September 30 2007, 20:26:23 UTC

We all love Tobi. XD

Thanks so much; I'm glad you enjoyed it!